Reviews for Caught in Between |
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LunaSalvete chapter 35 . 11/17/2018 Hi! Thanks for doing Elwin next! Also, I will never be able to be more evil than you. WHY AM I SO SAD ABOUT THIS? Also, I've read Flashback TWICE already. I'm still not as fast as some people... like, I got it on the day it came out, and my friend got it a day later, but she still read it before me! HOW?! Also, if you want another interview suggestion, you could interview one of the goblins, like Sandor, or Grizel, or maybe both at the same time... *wiggles eyebrows* SEE YOU NEXT TIME! |
DragonMoon chapter 34 . 11/13/2018 OMG I can't wait for the next chapter your stories are awesome! Do you think that you will be able to do an Ebony interview soon? Or if not, an Elwin one? Keep writing! |
LunaSalvete chapter 34 . 11/13/2018 I'm DragonMoon but I got an account so Ebony or Elwin plz! |
LunaSalvete chapter 1 . 11/13/2018 I got an account now so I'm DragonMoon SOOOOOO Ebony or Elwin plz(Does Elwin think Sophie's near death experiences get too repetitive? has he ever treated you deci?(I know your an elf)) |
ProjectMoonlark101 chapter 34 . 11/12/2018 yep, only her. anyways, that was so good! but really? with the cliffhanger? did you finish flashback yet? |
ProjectMoonlark101 chapter 33 . 11/5/2018 AHHAHAHAHAHAHAAA WHY EBIE WHY? ALSO AHAHHAHA LESS THAN 24 HRS UNTIL ILL BE READING FLASHBAAAAACK! OOOH CAN RO BE THE NEXT GUEST? AFTER MARELLA? |
Guest chapter 32 . 11/4/2018 This is slightly addicting...lol. You've definitely improved your writing as the story goes on. It's really good. |
AttemptedWriting101 chapter 32 . 11/3/2018 BRING IN BRONTE |
TooFarInToStop06 chapter 32 . 11/2/2018 Hi Undecided13, I started reading your one/two shots last night and I have all ready read all of them and all 32 chapters. My sisters think I have a problem with reading too much, but when I start reading something really good and interesting I just can't stop. I love your fan fictions so much! And of course Biana's hair always looks pretty. I think that all your chapters are good, but it made more sense to just review on the last one. I think that Linh or Tam should be the one to realise that Ebony isn't there, because they are really observant and I feel like even though they are good friends with Sophie, they wouldn't be as invested into the argument, but whatever you do I know that it'll be a lot of fun to read and that you probably have an amazing plot planned out. For your next guest I think you should do someone different, maybe Marella? Or one of the bodyguards. Anyway, thank you sooooooooo much for writing this story, I'm having so much fun reading it, I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. But I feel kind of bad for Ebony, because she didn't know what was happening, though she really should trust them. But for now, UNTIL NEXT TIME! p.s. can you privately reply to me I've never used this site before, but I don't really want to be mentioned to all the people that read this story. p.p.s I was really excited when I recognised "The Greatest Showman" lyrics, I really like the movie and the songs. |
AttemptedWriting101 chapter 31 . 10/31/2018 Tell Biana I like her hair |
ProjectMoonlark101 chapter 31 . 10/29/2018 yes i totally agree! boys aren’t really worth all the trouble if you ask me. friends are better. also, wow that was juts wow. i mean really that was kinda mean |
ProjectMoonlark101 chapter 30 . 10/27/2018 omg Ebie what are you doing and how did they not read her mind? i mean it’s amazing for the plot but still ajhahgjahdjgd |
ProjectMoonlark101 chapter 29 . 10/23/2018 woah that was so good! I can't wait for chaoter 30! Also can you believe its only 2 weeks until flashback? I can't Can you do Sophie's POV too for ch30? |
Mealle chapter 28 . 10/18/2018 Dex Dex Dex dex dex dex dex dex dex dex dex |
ProjectMoonlark101 chapter 28 . 10/18/2018 yaaaaay! i love Tam! great chapter! and that ending |