awwww thanks
but the main thing i wanted to know was who lol
i loved it, as jujual.
ooooh could you do fitz and keefe?

Bring Bangs Boy on here! (Sorry Keefe) But, you should also give Keefe a POV. Btw, hope you didn’t die from the death piggyback ride!

aww the thing with sophie at the end was really cute!
also, WHATTHEHECKISSHEOKAYWHERESTHENOTEWHAAAAAAAATISHAPPENING?!

Awww are you okay? *gives hugs from afar* That was a jerkface move on their part.

You don't know how bad I wanna see a jealous Sophie. You should make Keefe and Ebony bond then Sophie interrupts or something. I know it's kinda cliche but... I love your Steppy keep posting amazing chapters! I love seeing the characters emotions I feel like an empath in a weird way I don't know in weird.

Oh no I was just kidding! It was just a really big cliffhanger.
...
OMG IS SHE GONNA TELL?! SHE SHOULD! BUT SHE PROB WONT WILL SHE?
THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD
OOoooh ask Keefe where he thinks he’ll be in 100 years.
One more thing: I don’t want to be that person but... go read my stories! Or not! The only one that is even remotely ok is Universes Unite (rewritten)
But anyways do ittt! Or not, I don’t want to pressure you into reading something you don’t want to.
Ok um I’m done
Great chapter!

Woah.
Seriously tho!?
That wasn’t very nice.
I can’t wait for the next chapter
P.S. I loved the pie-ing Fitz! It was great.

Ooooh Fitz! That would be awesome! Maybe have some SOPHITZ vibes *wiggles eyebrows*
Also, again this was so great!
I hope Ebony is ok

Ahhhh i love how you had Keefe talking and stuff at the beginning and the end! It’s awesome!
Again, another great chapter!

Ooooh did she black out?
Yaaaaay this is good!

Oooooooh can you do Alden’s POV? Or Della’s? Oh oh oh do Leto!

I didn’t mean to make you feel like you can’t write your original idea, it’s your story and it will be great either way. Be you! (Smiling emoji)

I don't mean to be pushy or anything because this is your story and all but I really do want Sokeefe to be endgame and I get your vision and everything but... it would kinda ruin the story for me if Sophie ended up with anyone but Keefe and Dex is such an amazing character and it'd be really fun to see his relationship with Ebony devolop.
Sorry about the rant

Oooooh is Fitz falling for her too? Or is he just being nice? Gaaaaah I won’t be able to stop thinking about it now!
This is so great!
Like I said before, whatever you feel is best for the plot is what you should do. You’re writing is so good that I’m pretty sure that everyone will still love it, regardless of what happens in the story.

Please please please don't make it ebony and Keefe it'd be interesting to see Sophie be jealous of Ebony and Keefe but in the end Sokeefe has to come out on top! Btw I love your story!