WOW! I really love your idea about them being able to feel other hurt and all extras about Atlantis. Amazing! Can't wait to read your other stories! 3

I think I would be scared senseless if i lost my sight too!

So sweet how everyone is rallying around Rodney. Poor Rodney! Love this softer side of John.

Just letting you know that your Atlantis stories are definitely the best ones I've read on here. :D You've got a wonderful grasp of the characters and it feels like I'm reading straight out of an episode (or novel in this case, haha). Keep up the great writing! Love it!

(p.s. Rodney's so adorable... love that guy) ;D

I really loved this story! Thank you!

Nice ending, Rodney gets his eyes back and can "see" at the party that quite a few people care about him. I knew he would want to go back and check out that room, I bet sooner or later he will convince John to try it again.

Thanks and looking forward to the next adventure.

Nice story...love the bond between John and Rodney...without it being splashy...which to me was never what their friendship was about...brothers is perfect to describe them, though polar opposites they are so much alike. Thanks for sharing your story!

I greatly enjoy the concept of a mental link. There were a lot of unanswered questions, in the show, about the Ancient’s evolution and mental capabilities.

Great way to end this story, very satisfying. Thank you for another excellent, entertaining, and well written story! I am so looking forward to your next one! Hope to see it soon!

Yeah, new chapter. Please, keep them coming.

Hello Ladyshelley,
That is a really wonderful story and I loved reading it very much! Please please please continue writing sga-adventures! I am looking forward for new stories coming from you in the future and thank you for writing.
Love, Haike

Bravo and nicely done. Your writing is so fresh and natural. It reads like I'm watching an episode. Great ending!

Great ending! I love how you tied this story into The Defiant One episode. Nicely done. Good team building and friendship building story.

Yikes, lots of danger. Hopefully when Rodney recovers they can get back into the Envir systems. Got to be a lot of goodstuff there.

Thanks!