Reviews for GATE: Thus the Chosen One Fought There
Deathzealot chapter 12 . 10/1/2018
Hmmmm... For a new US President I would have gone with Jack Ryan, from Tom Clancy's Ryanverse Books, or that one guy from Stargate SG-1 who becomes President during the end of Season Seven.

Anyways an interesting story which I am actually enjoying for not being a fan of GATE.
Major Simi chapter 13 . 9/30/2018
Well seems like things did work out , nice chapter
Superstar Kid chapter 13 . 9/30/2018
So we find out who Anakin with be with: Tyuule. We saw how Delilah and Tyuule reunite after Tyuule's freedom and of course the fight (it's more like shouting and wanting to die and less fighting) I also like Rory always taking the mickey out of everything especially with Anakin around.

Now that Tyuule's free it will be interesting to see how she adjust and how her people with treat her. With Tyuule in Anakin's life. That's 3 women that will keep Anakin from getting too big for his britches. her, Rory and Padme, and if all 3 of them put up a united front. Look out!

I have a question though with Tyuule meet Padme? If being a slave is what Tyuule and Anakin have in common how about Padme and Tyuule being former queens? Not to mention from last chapter according to Anakin Tyuule is Padme if she haven't escaped Naboo. It will be an interesting conversation if they meet.

Now it's the Flame Dragon and more talking with Anakin and Delilah. Hopefully without Delilah kicking Anakin out of her bar again. Great chapters keep it up
Lord Mortensen chapter 13 . 9/30/2018
Awesome! I love this chapter! please update soon!
LoamyCoffee chapter 13 . 9/30/2018
Very good for them to hash things out.
hakon2feb chapter 7 . 9/30/2018
Rory talking to Yoda was fun :D However, i believe that with anyone growing to that age, they will eventually get too set in their ways (or at least that's my impression of Yoda). Perhaps it's a bit different for Rory, seeing as she isn't the person in charge (so to speak, if she only does the bidding of Emroy), and also isn't bound to as strict rules as the jedi in general.

As for Anikin being the representative for the rest of the galaxy at large towards both Earth and Falmart... I wouldn't say we are doomed, seeing as how far first contact goes we could have done much worse, but it will certainly be entertaining to see if Anikin will rise to the occasion :)

Keep up the good work :)
hakon2feb chapter 6 . 9/30/2018
Liked this chapter, as it sets up for a lot of growth in Anikin. Just Qui-Gon (he will always be Liam Neeson to me :p) showing up should have a huge impact on him, seeing as the last time they were together was at his funeral almost 10 years ago. With lots of people speculating on how Anikin would have grown if it was Qui-Gon who trained him instead of Obi-Wan i think this is the closest to teasing it you can come :p

As for the others, i think it's nice that Rory gets to shine a bit more in a mentor role, especially seeing as she is probably the oldest person around ever (except those three people from The Clone War... Father, Son and Daughter i think) :) I'm looking forward to more of this in future chapters :D

Keep up the good work :)
Mr. Figgs chapter 12 . 9/30/2018
oh God... zorzal is going to be a Sith lord isn't he? Good ole Palps is gonna arrive here, sense Zorz and take him as his apprentice... random thoughts0400 after 37hrs awake ...
DoctorHayden chapter 12 . 9/29/2018
So... the Boue. There are two forces known as "Blue" that I personally know of. One is the Fifth True Magic of Time Travel, Aoko Aozaki's Sorcery. It allows for the modification of Personal Time, and the Time of others. Among other things.

The other is the Blue, or Azure, from BlazBlue. It's simultaneously an infinite well of power and the facilitator of the cylce of Renicarnation or something, it's complicated.
Reishin Amara chapter 12 . 9/29/2018
To answer a review question,The Blue is Aokos title,her the name of her magic due to the glow it produces. It is,for all intents,Time Manipulation taken to extremes. Needless to say she can alter time to affect space, Light speed punches are a possibility,but usually what’s aoko does is simply blow things up. Streets,trees,...mountains in her way while on a casual walk.

I enjoy where your going with this story and a woman who was also a slave,it would work well.

Also since you mentioned Baltheir and Fran,now I’m sticking imagining what would happen if Anakin crashed in Ivalice. Heck,the princess pairing wouldn’t be a hard stretch in that crap,the Occuria basically torment The princess with a force ghost of her dead husband now that I think about it.

Kinda makes me wonder who else from other series would fit in Ivalice.
last admiral chapter 12 . 9/29/2018
i against this pairing! hail padme!
zetsubougintama chapter 12 . 9/28/2018
My comment on this chapter:

1. Could have build up more tension before execute the scene. Need more Anankin and Tyuule though. Hell, I can bet Tyuule will pissed Anakin right now after he pull a stunt like that. She kinda tsundere like that.

George Lucas: Ok, change a plan! Luke! Leia! Wearing this!
Mark Harmil: Is that... bunny ears? Why are you given us this?
George Lucas: Apearrenly, Anakin just dumped Padme and goes with hot amazonian bunny queen. So you two must wearing this.
Carrie Fisher: ...Well, this not gonna get worse than this right?
George Lucas: On the other note. You will be wearing these slave bikini outfit on next 2 movies.
Carrie Fisher: OH! COME ON!

Rey: ...Sooooooo, what's your story of that rabbit ears?
Kylo Ben: My grandfather married a hot amazonian bunny queen. That's all.
Rey: Hmmmmn... Neat.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/28/2018
About Anakin in Clone Wars TV series,
Search video called Star Wars: The Clone Wars - Anakin vs. The Son & The Daughter [1080p]
Guest chapter 12 . 9/28/2018
- The Blue
Yup. Aoko Aozaki, aka the Blue, Miss Blue, Magic Gunner Blue. Wielder of the Fifth True Magic.

Have read info from one source (Mahou Tsukai No Yoru)
that claimed it was Time Manipulation on a level that made the Emiya's look like Cavemen in comparison to a Time Lord.

Thus, she could regress Zelretch's age back to his prime, even if that should not be possible for an Apostle Ancestor.

Hence my wonderings if she could then do the reverse for Rory, make her body older.

Which again, due to divine intervention, shouldn't be possible.. But yeah.. True Magic and all that jazz.

- Relations
I briefly considered you hooking Anni up with Tyuule, but rejected that because you were already doing that in your HP story.

Figured you'd pick another character like Vao, before picking Tyuule again in a third story.

Not a complaint mind you, just explaining my reasoning. As you do like to mix things up.

- Zorzal
Okay, that scene was a bit confusing.

I initially thought that Zorzal burst into the throne room, while Daddy-kins was busy with the Japanese and Pina.

Then rejected that idea when Shino started wailing on him and Molt not saying a thing about it.

Only then to get to the bit about the Japanese Rep and Molt arguing about the Japanese captives.

It doesn't quite fit. You'd expect Molt to react to his son getting beat up.

Anni cones away looking best in that scene. Yes, he insulted Zorzal, but only after he escalated by spewing his garbage.

He also kept a full out battle from erupting with his Force Push.

Zorzal losing a limb. Well.. As Anni noted, Zorzal went for a weapon first, so self defense.


Can definitely sympathize with his desire to go for the"kill shot" though, guys like Zorzal always end up causing problems.

Kinda a mid state between Shinji and Perseus.

- Godmother
Couple of decades and that title will be quite literal BTW.

No real surprise to me, that she'd be nominated for the role.

Only other contender would be Padme and that would be all sorts of awkward.

With Lelei, the only other female he has a good bond with being too young for the role for at least another 5y or so, as she needs some more life experience.

So yeah. Rory is a bit of a gimmie for the role.

Godfather.. Well.. Obi-Wan would probably have a fit over the relationship. Never mind that the Correlian Jedi do it all the time.

So he'd be out..
Looks like Itami just got nominated.

As for the imagery.. *shrugs*

You did the kiddies with Harry already, so no shockers there.

Plus, the kids wouldn't be Luke and Leia. As, iirc, Padme named them. And then there's the difference in genetics.

Analogues? Yes.
Alternates? No.

Least that's what my sleepy mind is arguing. May change it after some more coffee.
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