Everytime Ash opens his mouth it sounds like he's giving a TED talk.

absolutely adored the story and your version of Ash. Even if you never read this again or update again now you made an amazing story. Thank you

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Much as I fear you're either dead or simply out of the game by choice, on the off chance you aren't, here's something special to hopefully feed the flames of your creative fire, or at least give you something to enjoy; thank you for what you did write, regardless.
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Hey, just read your fic, and its my favorite of all pokemon fic EVER, i just love when there's a spicy of romance in pokemon histories, its all much better than just endless grinding or evil organization drama, and my favorite ship ever is with LEAF, SHE IS SO CUTE! ( i totally needed more fluffly moments of hugs and stares, she should have hugged him on that lake, damn)

love all his pokemons too and his methods, im endless curious about giovanni setup and stuff, and i really hope one day u can come back to this, but in case that u dont just know that i appreciate the time and effort u put onto this!

I hope you one day decide to come back. Pinnacle remains as one of my favorite stories to this day. Hope you’re doing good.

So I know you’ve probably stopped writing but I wanted to drop a review to say I’ve really enjoyed the stories I’ve read from you and would be happy to see them continue. I think this story is definitely your most polished one in that I spotted less grammar mistakes than your Harry Potter or My Hero Academia stories but I think all of those stories are good and would love to see more.

I know it’s been almost 4 years now but I still like to check in on this story every couple months to see if there is an update. This story is so good and you are a fantastic writer! I hope you come back to this story one day!

I like how in almost every good Pokemon fanfiction Giovanni is Ash's dad

All I can say is; This is a bloody good story. I’ll just dl this for good measure for the unseeable future.

Update please please update

Bro I can tell by to the 1 chapter this is going to be good

Since Ash got both Charmander/Charizard and Totodile/Feraligatr, I can assume that he'll get Treecko/Sceptile for his Grass-type? perhaps after battling Erika, he's given one.

Will he get Riolu/Lucario next, perhaps his canon Riolu-egg once in Vermillion.

And both Eevee/Espeon and Gible/Garchomp (the Psychic and Dragon that fits Ash the most, and I've not seen a Traveler-esque story where he has either, other than Espeon in Challenger, but that's just one story, and you clearly don't think that "underrated" pokemon somehow instantly makes a story better, even at all).

ash tipo

Ash: eres un tipo brillando Paul sin embargo cometiste un gran error te metiste con mi mejor amiga

is this story dead