Can you please update a hero’s will and ambition.

História excelente!
Pena que o capítulo terminou... Gostaria de continua lendo. Kkkkkkkk

Good update. Hope you stay healthy

Hey man, glad to see you again! Your prose was definitely more mature and I liked this chapter, so whatever you do, good luck!

Thanks For The Chapter!

Don’t listen to guest we a wanker and to lazy to write his own story, because he a cunt.

Great story I was hoping you update this real soon because I don’t want it left incomplete.

Please don't answer reviews in the chapters it's annoying and theres a reason the pm function exists. Other than that good chapter

... Eevee... maybe... please... muffin?

Great to see an update. Looking forward to more!

Sounds good so far

Now he has three mid range pokemon. Wonder if he included Samurai in his report.

Glad that dumb bitch is gone. No mention of her being his best friend before last chapter and then bam! What amazing writing! Not! How are you in medical school? You barely have an elementary grasp of writing and grammar, I doubt you have much intelligence in other fields. Are you from one of those poor countries where the only requirements are filling out one page applications?

Just fucking with you for the most part man. Good luck in your studies and look forward to more of the story. Your writing has really improved.

I know that you probably will, but I just wanted to show support anyway; ignore the guest reviewer. Any story will have grammar and spelling mistakes and yours are not anywhere close to making the story unbearable to read. This is one of the best "realistic" pokemon fics on here. The only downside is that is not yet at the length of some like "Traveler", "Uprising", or "Challenger". Keep up the good work.

Your pan is is about the exact opposite of cool and epic. How fucking boring and mediocre is your life that you think that? Even more spelling and grammar mistakes! How the fuck are you in college? Even a simple word processor would have picked up on these juvenile errors.