Wow! Even more spelling and grammar mistakes! It also seemed like you had a stroke towards the end there as well. Are you one of those special needs kids? That would explain a lot of the very poorly written chapters. But I do have to commend you on trying if you are disabled.

So from what I've seen, I can confidently say that this story is very well written overall. There are very good descriptions of events, actions, characters, and surroundings. There is also a very present sense of realism to this story that sets it apart from other fics that seem to be like living a video game instead or the real world (such as fics that insert the IV/EV mechanic). I particularly enjoyed the descriptions of Charmander's scales, as he looks smooth skinned in the games even though he is a lizard, and the addition of latent type energy. The dialogues are also enjoyable and realistic. You've done well describing the training the pokemon go through without going into thousands upon thousands of words ramming it down our throats- an excellent balance that lets the readers progress well with the story and giving events better pacing. There are a few minor grammatic errors here and there but not so many that it takes away from the story. In short, well done! The only criticism I have isn't even criticism so much as selfishness, and that is I wish there were more to the story to read than there currently is :P Thank you for taking all of this time and putting forth all of this effort so that readers like us can enjoy the world you are creating in the pokemon universe.

And stop with the Cyber muffin bullshit. Are you an 8 year old little girl for what? Fucking dumbass.

You are an idiot that shouldn't be giving people advice on diet and nutrition either. Are you a licensed expert? Have you even taken biochemistry?

Also, get a fucking beta reader! These goddamn spelling and grammar errors are atrocious! Again I have to ask, are you an 8 year old girl?

Thank you for putting your review responses up before the chapter began. Not that it answered any questions but it showed what kind of idiot you truly are and has saved me a ton of time now that I will not be reading this story.

Lol your threat to another reviewer about how you are worse than Cercei Lannister? So much fucking cringe! You say how you are so mature and yet you write such a childish statement? What a fucking loser, you shouldn't take yourself so seriously.

I also love how you put down another writer because they don't have a lot of reviews or follows and yet you are nothing compared to the greats on here. You aren't great enough to even lick The Great Elf's shoes so not sure why you feel you are Superior and get to put down other people.

Interesting.

anyone betting bnha sport festival vibes right now?

GaryBakugo
PaulTodoroki

By far one of the best written stories I’ve read

Very nice

So glad that you updated, this is one of only six Pokemon fanfictions that I actually regularly look up. Plus none of the others have updated just as long ago as you had, so please keep it up!

Suggestions for Pokemon most writer don't give ash and can fill the types he lacks:
Drapion- Poison/Dark
Aegislash- Steel/Ghost
Abomasnow- Ice/Grass
Medicham- Fighting/Psychic
Vikavolt- Bug/Electric
Togekiss- Fairy/Flying
Tyrantrum- Rock/Dragon

Great chapter. I had to re-read this just remember what was going on, but it was worth it. Glad your back, and doing alright. Man, your life was hectic lol. Hope this gets updated again soon.

This was a great chapter and I can’t wait to see more! I’m glad you’re feeling better!

Great Chapter! Can’t wait for the next one

I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!

So I had a question about ranking points, do you have a table or something you're using for it? Just so we readers also have an idea of how much each takes. Anyways looking forward to the next chapter and seeing the Lt. Surge fight as well as the trip on the St. Anne. I presume that Ash's winning streak is going to end and it's going to be a learning experience but how long, in chapters, do you think it will be until you bring it in?