This story is so good that I keep checking that if its been updated.

I've really enjoyed reading your story, and I especially like how... believable you've made it, and how well thought out a system you have for explaining the Trainer battle mechanics and classes, can't wait for the next update!

Awesome story!
I really enjoy your mix of training, fighting and character interaction. Also are your describtions and ideas on pokémon training/progression ejoyable and much more realistic than most other Pokémon fanfics out there.
Question are you gonna give Ash a dragon type? If so would you consider a Deino/Hydreigon, as far as I have seen this pokémon is barley used in fanfictions and it would cover two types which Ash doesn't have yet.
Just a little hope of mine, either way the the team Ash currently has is great. Do you plan to change the carry limit for Pokémon somehow or will you leave it as it is?

Amazing chapter can’t wait for the next one! I was so pumped that you gave ash a Totodile, it works really well with his team! I don’t know if you thought of more Pokémon in his team but I feel like the seedot line would work very well for his team and not a lot people give ash that line of Pokémon. Also Electrike would be great too but that’s just me hoping, either way I know you know what you are doing and can’t wait for the next chapter which I hope is like in like a few days or next week

I like Lead, hope you pair them later on in your fic since Ash and Leaf have good chemistry and clearly care about each other

Woow :p

Need more! Your sir are a amazing fanfiction writer! You made Ash believable smart and determined in the world you have created. With the backing of a regional professor and a relatively well off family he would be this good. I have so many questions: You have show that ash will be more quality than quantity type of trainer, but will he get some of his original team in you're story? Will the world you have created allow ash to bring his team from one region to another outside of tourniments? You have said that NO ONE will have legendary's, but will Ash ever meet any? In the future will Ash compete in Poké-contest's? Will some of the event were Ash helps people even happen(rapidash race, Ditto incident,ect.)? What's with the whole UNOVA thing(is UNOVA trying to keep mega evolution a secret?)? I know there are a lot of question and I don't expect any answers; your story gets me so interested that I can't stop asking "what's next?"! Anyway I have rambled enough. I hope you keep writing and I'm looking forward to more.

SO GOOOOD. I can't wait for more.

Just gotta day, I am loving this! His team is shaping out to be amazing, and I’m excited to see the next parts of his adventure. Keep up the awesome work!

When will you update the Hero's Will and Ambition

I'm honestly loving your story so much. You're a great writer and have a talent for writing lovable characters and worlds. You did really well in developing the world and it is so easy to get engrossed into the story. There were only a few grammar mistakes (or it could've been just forgotten words that you forgot to type out) but that's to be expected with a chapter this long. I hope your muse keeps you going for this story because I can't wait to read more.

That was a amazing chapter and the battles we're great and giving ash a todadile is a great water starter for him to have and I can't wait for his next Pokemon, the next evolutions, and the next chapter.

Thanks for writing. Pretty good, though the Charmeleon using his claws as a ground to divert electricity is used in Challenger, which isn't an issue necessarily, except you gave no background to Igneel learning the technique, making it seem somewhat cheep.

Hey, love the new chapter can’t wait for the next. I hope you do add a Scyther cause I feel like it would be a good rival in training for Charmeleon. If you’re taking suggestions for additions I feel like an Abra would be a good addition to the team what with teleport and its wide variety attacks.

Love your story so far keep up the good work I look forward to reading moreeee