are you ever going back to finish your Potter story? or any other story

are you ever going back to finish your Potter story?

really good

I don't normally review (I don't even have an account), but i just want to say your story's great and ignore the other, arsehole guest writer. They're just a sick fuck who gets enjoyment out of making others miserable. If they continue to be a problem just turn anon reviews off. You shouldn't have to deal with them.

Please don’t stop your writing! You are very talented and your stories are great!

So glad you’re back! I hope you’re feeling better! Please update this story soon! Can’t wait to see ash vs surge!

Hi, after reading the newest chapter I took the opportunity to go back and reread the story as a whole and I just wanted to let you know that I think your writing has improved considerably over the course of the story. I really enjoy the story and hope you keep improving the way you have been.
Cheers.

I love the story. By the way, when will the next update come out?

good fic

I really like your story and your idea but are you not making ash too overpowered mean soon he get overconfident and then a new rival OG who beat him not easily but not without much difficulty so that he know he have a long way to go... it just my opinion

update Potter please

Welcome back, glad to hear that your are on the mend. Please continue your excellent stories.

I'd planned to leave a review for this after catching up with the last chapter, but life decided it wanted to thoroughly kick my ass, so I never got around to it. Oh well, better late than never.

First off, I'm glad you've gotten over your health issues. I've had more than my fair share of health issues myself, some of which I'm still struggling with, so I sympathise with you. Remember, your health comes above everything else, so if you need to take even more time off, do so. Us fanfiction writers don't get paid to do this, so we shouldn't let readers pressure us into writing when we're not feeling up to it.

But I digress. Getting back on track, I like how you've managed to consistently maintain the more realistic tone of your version of the Pokemon world, without going overboard and making it overly dark. The way it is now, the story has enough gritty realism to make Ash's journey feel tense and dangerous, while also maintaining the innately whimsical feel of the series. I don't doubt that the drama is going to ramp up significantly when you delve deeper into the Team Rocket storyline, but I hope you don't make the tonal shift too jarring.

Your version of Ash does feel a tad too competent, but I can accept it given that real life prodigies do exist in our world, so it's not too far out of the realm of possibility. That said, his cockiness is starting to grate on me a bit, and I look forward to seeing him get brought back down to Earth. I'm going to predict that Surge gives him a thorough walloping.

I haven't read a great deal of Pokemon fanfiction, but from what I have read, I've found that most writers who attempt epic-length retellings of Ash's journey make it so that Pokemon are allowed to use unlimited moves, instead of just the usual four from the games and anime. While that's perfectly fine - as you've said so yourself, this is fanfiction - I personally prefer it when writers stick to Pokemon only being able to use four moves. I think it makes battles a lot more strategic, as trainers can't just spam a bunch of different moves, and have to make do with only four. It also encourages more out-of-the-box thinking, which really separates the talented trainers from the average schmucks.

But, to your credit, you've done a great job with your Pokemon battles thus far, and I have no doubt you'll continue to do so. I just would've liked to see how you'd handle Pokemon battles in which Pokemon have limited movesets.

Anyway, these thoughts are more subjective than anything, so make of them what you will. If there's one genuine criticism I have of your fic, it's the complexity of the dialogue - one of the hardest things to get right in writing. While your grasp of English is great, I do feel like your characters speak a bit too maturely for their age. As smart as Ash and co. are, they're still just thirteen-year-old kids; they shouldn't be sounding like grown adults studying to be philosophers. That's a bit of an exaggeration on my part, but my point remains: these kids sound WAY too smart of be kids. It makes the dialogue as a whole sound a tad unnatural. Now, this is by no means a massive flaw that greatly detracts from my enjoyment of the story as a whole, but I do think it's worth mentioning because your fic has a lot of potential, and I want to see it reach that potential.

I ended up rambling a bit with this review, but hey, that just shows how invested I am in your fic. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter.

Can you update Potter please its my favorite story of yours its one of the best Harry Potter stories out there

Can you update Potter Please its my favorite story of yours its one of the best Harry Potter stories out there