Reviews for A new generation and hope
SpiritualLoneWolf XIII chapter 17 . 10/20
I've been working so much I almost missed this. We're finally gonna see the group come together! I can wait.
stevenuniversefanz37 chapter 17 . 10/9
Question? did you make my character a female or male? I noticed you used both in the chapter.
lionkingfactsguy3 chapter 15 . 10/9
Perfect interpretation
lionkingfactsguy3 chapter 17 . 10/9
Was that part with those soldiers inspired by the Star Wars Clone Wars animated shorts? Because that sounded like the Hypori battle between the jedi amd Grievous.
Saphira Winters chapter 17 . 10/9
This is AWESOME! I enjoyed reading it. However I do have a little comment. Make sure to write female characters with female pronouns. Because you're still using male pronouns on female characters. For example you said "holding his locket" instead of "holding her locket" when you wrote about my OC. My suggestion is when you translate it, be sure to read it over and make sure you have everything correct. That being said, I look forward to reading more. :-D
Saphira Winters chapter 16 . 8/5
This is AMAZING! I LOVE it. however there are some spell checks such as using him instead of Her in the conversation between Rain and her sister. But other that that, it was an AWESOME chapter.D
SpiritualLoneWolf XIII chapter 15 . 6/24
Tingfeng sounds like a bouncy character. I had to it up because I never heard of that species before but a Binturong is adorable!
Lord demon chapter 15 . 6/20
Sorry I press the post review as I was saying Deviant has to careful with his pride because if his opponents decided to use his pride in order to lose his guard, he volunteer to join the main villain cause he was bored in his cave home not finding anything or anyone to torment or to kill
Lord demon chapter 15 . 6/20
Well I have two oc's one hero and one villain.
The hero is named Savage Slayer and the villain is named Deviant, Savage Slayer (real name blood) is wolf around 32, he has white fur, red eyes, wears a silver light armor with chains and a wolf helmet to cover his face, he is armed with a short sword and a short shield, he personality is he takes his job seriously but there are time where he cracks a sense of humor, he is an expert on hand to hand combat, and another note he is from Europe and he got the name Savage Slayer is because he only slays savages and only take task that deals with Savages, The Savages are trolls, cyclops, Minotaurs, demons, dark elves, goblins, hobgoblins, mind flayers, ogres, orcs, and wulvers, Savage Slayer also has the ability to transfer energy from his hands goe straight to his short sword and short shield that is later goes into enemies in which it incinerate them or he can transfer energy from his hands and heals either his or a friend wound the secret to his energy transfer is his breathing, he needs to breath steady in order to transfer energy, if he breath to quick or having trouble breathing the energy transfer stops. The reason why he is in the tournament is because he needs to pay for the roof of his house so the rain wouldn't drip and there is no more task involving Savages, during the tournament his supporters is his step family (yeah I've forgot to mention he is a stepfather and step husband) he is a stepfather to an otter pup and a step husband to an otter maid, as for the villain Deviant is a demon, he resembles a humanoid, with pale skin, red pupil less eyes, long claws, bat like wings horns and fangs, he wears a black leather suit, a metal mask to cover his face but expose his mouth, he is not open to tell his age, he personality is that he is very crazy, find other people suffering humorous, very prideful, and enjoys killing, this demon has the ability to fly thanks to his wings, toy with his opponents in order to get their guard down, moves in quick speed, and use his claws, hus weakness is his pride he has to be careful when it come his most obvious personally
Saphira Winters chapter 15 . 6/19
This chapter is so...AMAZING! X-D really awesome. :-)
SpiritualLoneWolf XIII chapter 14 . 6/5
I didn't realize you updated it. Meng is a pretty interesting character though. I'm waiting until everyone gets to the point where they finally conversate with one another as a team.
lionkingfactsguy3 chapter 14 . 6/3
Still waiting for my OC to appear
Saphira Winters chapter 14 . 6/2
AWESOME chapter and really cool OC. I can not wait to read more. However please take your time with the update as I can understand how busy and unexpectable life can be.D
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26
Speed Racer 2020
Guest chapter 2 . 4/26
Name: Hongse (which is red in Chinese), Red
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Weapons: Scythe
Personality: Friendly, quiet, and extremely dangerous
Appearance: a tiger in a black dress that goes down to her knees with two crosses on the sides, black leggings, and a red hood
Weakness: impatient, leaves a trail of rose petals behind when she runs
Strength: super fast, has a lot of friends in Bunker 9
Motivation: Heroic
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