Guess now Teach is now being monitored, good. Wonder what the Marines would feel once they learned everything soon? One things for sure, Akainu will hunt Ace personally given the chance.

Yo! This is great! And pun intended on Akainu's lava heart... :P

But with regards to that,,, How about Shanks and Benn have a little fun with the Lady Spade game? What if some unknown caller hinted that a black haired kid was seen with Lady Spade, and hinted that he may be the son of Akainu out of wedlock, and that he's sailing the grandline with his mother to know about his real parentage like some angsty teenage bout of rebelion,,, and Akainu believes he is his because of the blackhair description. And Sengoku adds a new curriculum in marine ethics. :D -Just a suggestion. :D

Oh man I am so loving your story! It‘s so good to read, and it just makes me laugh so much (especially the marine parts - loved the ‚I lava you‘).
You know fun fact: technically Ace is a noble - he is after all the pirate-prince (if there is something like that). And I also really hope that in the future you will include a Ace/Sabo/Luffy reunion, I would soooo dig that! Another thing I‘m curious about is, even if there is just a tiny bit of romance in it, is it gonna be Marco/Ace? Cause I just love this pairing so much!
Can‘t wait for the next chalters and thank you for your work :)

Omg, you have created a masterpiece! Can't wait to are where you are going with this!

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You write both serious and comedy beautifully. Shanks' interaction with Ace, and the rumors about Akainu are a thing of wonder.

Niiiice ~
Oh I really like this xD
Your rumors about Akainu are the best part :D
Greetings G1ntsuk1

Holy fuck this fic is glorious! I've never read a more perfect time travel ace fic, it's perfectly cracky and made me laugh like a lunatic I love this so much! Ace messing with the marines is so fucking in character and hilarious af, you're now my fave author I love you for writing this!

Omg yes. Keep it coming.

Also liked Shanks’ bit on Roger.

Hahaha thanks for the update it was amazing!

Oh, man you made my day again! xD XD xD This chapter was suuuupeeeer! *FailedFrankyImpersonation *WayTooGiddyThisMorning

Okay, I'll calm down a bit. But by the way things look, either that Ace has more control on his Mera Mera no Mi or his fire power isn't as crazy as his anime/manga counterpart (I mean summer came when he passed by Drum Island). Hmm... I'm not sure which one, but I think he may have deliberately made it to train (torture) his crew to the cold weather.

I love the Shanks and Ace interaction. I'm happy to get more than expected. XD *SqueeeModeOn I hope to see more of reactions in the future (at least via Den Den Mushi). Since he knows who Ace is, I have a hunch he'll consider (secretly) Ace as his godson but make sure the others are none the wiser. I can see Ace and Shanks prank Marco for some reason.

Anyways, just an idea of how further get into Whitebeard's good graces and reconnect with old friends (attain more allies) plus freak out Ace's crew [because I find those interactions so hilarious] before we get to Whitebeard. Consider Ace getting to meet up with Oars Jr. He's an allied captain to the Whitebeards, sacrificed his life at Marineford to save Ace, and a giant to boot (The guy can even push the Moby Dick with people on it for crying out loud!). That guy deserves a medal for going the lengths he did for Ace. I'll leave the crazy ideas to you (for freaking out Ace's crew). x)

The part where Garp's pov is where I think I died (laughing). Yes, I blame you, author, for having the "I lava you" song stuck in my head and it's Akainu singing it! X"D Having Sengoku and Tsuru joining in the fun was icing on the cake. It'll be funnier if the reactions happened in a large Marine meeting or something.

I don't mind if the updates are slower. RL in the end always comes first. So no worries.

I've been spotting some typos here and there in your chapters btw. If you want to fix your chapters you can go to Publish Doc Manager Click Edit/View chapter. Then to update it back in your fic: Manage Stories Click your story Content/Chapters Replace/Update Chapter Select which Chapter to replace & the document Replace content with document.

Oh, and if you want a nifty grammar checker that's good, try grammarly dot com. I use it for writing in general and for academics too. It's waaay better than MS Word. Just sign up the free version. Hope this helps with your writing!

As always, I'll be awaiting for your next chapter! If you need plot ideas or anything to bounce off on, be my guest and PM me. Hope you have a nice day!

The meeting went well and I'm so happy about the rumours Ace is spreading out

Oh god, I absolutely love this Story!

I wonder what Ace will tell his Crew... Will it be just about his father, or about the whole thing? I can see them teasing Ace, saying he's got a crush on a flaming turkey (after All, he does love his food)

just imagine how their kids would look like. pffffffffft hahaha

and you are fast too! I'm so in love with you right now