Reviews for Unfit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ironic, that in the end, the only one to still end in a sad ending thats not bittersweet is Kakashi, given the added trauma of seeing the very much trusted wife of the teacher he so loved try to kill the last direct link to his team besides herself. Dude lost the trust of his students, Naruto doesnt blame him but itll make all subsequent conversation that mjch awkward. But then again, Kakashi's middle name may aswell be called Trauma since the only way he can forget and go past them is when he loses the Sharingan, whose very presence remains because of trauma (hell i noted the part where he states that both he and Kushina are pretty much trash dude actually managed to succesfully save Naruto but still sees it as a failure because Minato) Nice story however. Ps: Oh snap the fight between Mikoto and Kakashi would be amazing, hahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() People who leave awful comments that don’t even really pertain to the fic itself are stupid and should be ignored. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What sort of traumadesire for forced drama make Uzumaki Kushina a BAD MOTHER!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was shit and u could have Naruto beat the shit out of them instead u r making him act like a retard like his canon counterpart and as for kushina she should not have any happiness or be with mikoto she she have been left to die in darknesss and loneliness for being a coward and I hope u do a rewrite of the ending cause it was confusing as hell |
![]() ![]() Bastard how can you leave it behind just like that finish it do not leave us in the middle this is such a good story I am too anxious for the ending so complete it. The story is truly good |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn man, I read this everytime I want to go on an emotional rollercoaster. Still hits the same after so many years. Hope you are doing well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am glad I reread this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I dont think an interaction has ever frustrated me more than the one between Tsunade and Naruto in this chap. What an absolute c*** and Narutos reaction was beyond unsatisfying |
![]() ![]() ![]() some things are better uncompleted, and this fic is one of them. I can't recommend it enough, it's a heart ache to read, but those small jabs and lines are so well written you feel a certain satisfaction with it. even though it's heartwrenching, it is such an addictive fic. The dialogues given are well placed and the timing is perfect. All in all a worth read even if it's an au... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man atleast you could have gotten us a final epilogue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Painful as all hells |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this is like drinking poison. This is so sad man. Extremely entertaining. I couldn’t stop myself from continuing to read. After reading most of it, it went from drinking poison to eating extremely bitter dark chocolate. It’s well written, I don’t regret reading this. |
![]() ![]() My opinion but I feel likee Kakashi can clap atleast half the Akatsuki and Guy definitely can destroy them 8 gates included. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but I can't give you 10k of likes. Even if it's worth it |