Reviews for Spider and Snake REQUESTS CLOSED
Zyenna chapter 31 . 7/4/2020
I loved it! I don’t know why I love the dark and angsty stories so much (maybe cause I can relate) but I do. Your writing is brilliant and your story refreshing. I love the dynamics between Peter and Loki as friends. I would love to see more written. Update when you can friend!
SwedishMerlinFan chapter 31 . 7/4/2020
This was soooo good. I really felt it. Great job and looking forward to your next update.
Redwillow chapter 30 . 6/20/2020
Wonderful chapter! 3 Hah, I squealed out loud when I saw that there was a new one. Congrats on 30 chapters, by the way! I just adore this series. x3 And no worries about the wait- this chapter was well worth it. It’s always great to have some Peter and Loki stuff! Well, anyways, enough with my rambling- have a great day!
SapphireRuby24 chapter 30 . 6/19/2020
This was great! I love the way Peter and Loki interact here!
DudeTrustTheCloak chapter 30 . 6/19/2020
Ho-ly mackerel, has it been thirty chapters already!? Time flies where you're reading good writing, huh?
I really am sorry you've been dealing with all of that, and my admiration for you has only grown higher as you continue to publish another chapter despite all of it. Just because your dream profession is one criticized by others for it's few rotten members, doesn't mean you friends can treat you like that. I don't speak for everyone, but when I say that protecting others as a member of the police force is a noble job, I mean it. It's a few bad apples that bring their prejudice against others into that job that ruin the entire force's reputation.
Friends turning on you is a terrible feeling, but as someone who only knows your words. (Which are truly wonderful by the way...) I am quite proud of you.
Your kitten sounds like a dear, and quite adorable. With your care, I am sure they are in good hands.
Now, I absolutely loved this chapter, and how Peter could tell between all thr Loki's who was fake. I never thought of the weapon theory, that Loki is usually a ranged fighter and would never use midgardian weapons unless necessary. Once again wonderful writing, I got really invested in the story you were telling. I hope these words find you well,
- Chaos
Belbelanne chapter 30 . 6/19/2020
So glad that Peter and Loki are both safe, love the whole trust scene and Thor acting as a mother hen.
Zaplo chapter 30 . 6/19/2020
I wonder who is the imposter Loki Oo amora? well, u should follow your own heart. certainly many HV their own beliefs n thoughts. Police is a hard job but at the same time rewarding. However, u should be careful still as there will be always bad guys to deal with, like burglar n stuff. There is also other jobs which can help society so try to be open minded if one option is not available for now.
100maggiemccumber chapter 30 . 6/19/2020
This update made my day! I can't wait for the next chapter! This was so good!
catastrophiqu chapter 30 . 6/19/2020
your story's make me smile and I love all the comedy and angst (can't think of the right word(Loki would probably know))

at first I thought Loki had been brainwashed then there was the room of loki's which I can see that scene now and it's beautiful

thank you for writing these
AbsentDrawnn chapter 30 . 6/18/2020
Awwww this is so cute! I love this chapter, don’t worry about posting as much. Take your time! I understand the difficulties of the current events taking place, but that shouldn’t turn you down. I hope the kitten is recovering well! I’m really digging the mother and son bond between Loki and Peter, can’t get enough of it really. Sending my love and support to you! 3 3 3
WordSmyth chapter 23 . 5/31/2020
I have absolutely no idea what MJ and Peter were doing. My best guess is MJ was Casablanca at a strip club and Peter was Rocky Horror Picture Show meets Flash Dance?
Low-Key Loki chapter 29 . 5/14/2020
Oh my god this is so cute!
catastrophiqu chapter 20 . 5/8/2020
dang it you're making me pull a tony with how good these one shots are
maybe I'll sleep now and finish them in the morning not three in the morning more like ten... yeah that sounds good
anyway Peter now knows Italian wonder how well that'll go down at his school
good stories
catastrophiqu chapter 13 . 5/8/2020
clearly tony just pays the bills and says no refunds
Vidgealz C Valvatore chapter 11 . 3/31/2020
I know this is old, but I just wanted to say thank you so much for sharing your author's note at the end of this chapter. The crazy part about all of this is that this isn't the only fandom with this problem. Naruto, Black Butler/Kuroshitsuji, Harry Potter, Avatar The Legend Of Korra, Final Fantasy XIII, Attack on Titan, etc. They all have this problem and many more disturbing flaws. I don't even want to step foot in the Supernatural fandom ever again. I swear fanfiction (not all, but probably most) stories has gotten absolutely terrible and continues to get worse as time goes on. Rape but the character(s) like it, incest, pedophilia, etc. The list goes on. A lot of these stories have these disturbing things in them. No one says anything about it because it goes under "fiction". It's creepy and uncomfortable. If this keeps up. I'm just going to drop fanfiction all together. Once more, thank you for mentioning it in your Author's Note. I thought I was the only one seeing it.
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