good story

This was quite interesting. I always like reading people's interpretation of how Raven came to be. Well done. The interaction between Raven and Prozen was excellent; Raven was exactly as most would picture: Raven trying to fit in but not being subservient to Proven too much.

I am very much liking the way you write, even though I refuse to delve into shonen-ai. A nice, milder look on how it could have happened. :-)

That was kewl, v. sweet, if you go bye the Prozen we all know from da show he was bit OOC, but we never do see much about there relationship, it's a good story, who knows, Prozen could have been nice before his sudden want of power. I guess we will never know. Aw well, it sucks but hey. This is a great story.

That was really good, I loved it. You are a good writer, keep up the work.

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Better tp rule hell that serve in heaven

This is very nice. I like how Prozen and Raven "bond" in this story. I always did wonder about their relationship. Because..you know they have respect for each other, yet..there's still a distance..

(Don't you just love the art museum? I also the love the normal museum... that moving lizard scares me shitless though... **sighs sadly** I'm a wimp. Hope you enjoyed Brisbane, sweetie! )

At this point, I will sniff. Repetitively. That was gorgeous, Plinky. It's always nice to get a non-violence relationship between the two, but I've never seen it done is such a true-to-the-character way. God, I swear you've converted me to be a Prozen fan... I was one before, but damn. I'm now obsessive.

Gah, I really love the 'relationship'. High cute factor.

As always, spectacular writing. I wish I had a style that portrayed the characters as well as you do. (That didn't make sense...)

You have no idea how grateful I am for this fic! I was just having problems with how to potray Raven's 'father' relationship (with what I'm fiddling with right now) and you hit the nail on the head. **bows** Master...

Lovely work. I love you to pieces. **hugs**

Hello from a FELLOW AUSTRALIAN DWELLING WRITER who hasn't been to Brisbane in ages but remembers the Art Museum very clearly.

In response to the fic, I thought that was absolutely lovely. I'm no great lover of Prozen or Raven and I've never had opinions of my own about their early relationship, but I like the idea that Prozen was easy on him. Of all the young-Raven fics I've read I think this one has been the best.

Gah, you made me feel terrible about how I portrayed Prozen. I was just in a dark, angsty mood when I wrote that one. I especially like the way Gunther (oh look first name basis XD) is developed in your stories. He's certainly a much more believable character than the cold, monstrous and sadistic guy who appears in other fics, including my own. It's good that you can take the opposite angle and flesh it out. My fic was actually focussed on Raven more than anything, so sadly Prozen was more of a prop than anything. It probably wouldn't surprise you to learn that in my other fiction, I just wrote a scene where Raven gets shot... twice.

I'm so awful XD.

But great one-shot piece, plink! Keep going on Cantus.

Plink, I know THAT (Brisbane) well. Lol!

I love the spin you have placed upon each charater here. And I agree, you are one of the better reviewers. (People have been getting cranky with me recently, over my run down of their story(ies). But ANYWAY) I thought that Prozen would act like that too, arrogant but slightly loving it its own way..., and it made it far more believable to me. Actually, it gives me an idea...

Wait to see my Prozen ficcy, it sound so good in my head!

And lastly, I cant wait for the next Cantus!

Maelgwyn

Oh, that was original. First time I see ar Raven-Prozen story without any cruelty or rape. I really liked your story.