Reviews for Teamwork
ZombieRider chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
that was strange, and yet so funny :D and yet, still strange XD
livesonwisteria chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
KariHermione chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Laurinasta Blaze chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Dude, you tend to do one-shots alot. However, i think that if you wanted to extend this short piece into a longer one that gives more detail into the characters and their motivations, i'd be really beautiful. You should consider writing longer pieces every now and then because alot of your stories have vast potential. Anyway, i loved the concept behind Teamwork and applaud your daring. Love this piece, Lauri.
Cheez Wizz chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
that has to be the strangest thing i've ever read. i cant decide if i liked it, although the writing was good, it was just...strange.
NovaGirl chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
OOh, some fun in the locker room...

If I had been bitten by such a plot bunny, I might have been scared myself. But you've an immense talent, and you make depraved work. _ Bravo! Or brava. Or whatever. But you get the picture! YAY!