A really exciting chapter.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Please continue this story and update soon!

I hope things get better for you soon. I can't wait to read your fanfic!

actually, Lucy did leave a note when she left. She said she was going home. that's the only way Team Natsu had any idea where she went.

So that's invalid, Doom Marine. I recall that quite vividly. if you can't recall that, I suggest re-reading early issues.

Doom Marine,there is a difference between Lucy leaving for two-three days at most to clear the air with her father, and Natsu just up and leaving for a whole year to train with just a note. Stop using that argument again because it makes you look like a fool with no concept of time.

not bad, a semi-used concept, but it's a good one to see everyone's different take on it.

I see a few spelling/Grammar issues, but that's it.

I’m really looking forward to this story! So far so good!

I love this story!

*love the story so far good job~

So far love in the story

Lucy left at the end of the Phantom Lord arc without even leaving a note so she's got no right to complain about Natsu, also Fairy Tail didn't abandon her she CHOOSE to go off on her own. Also Aquariolus was definitely not a second mother to her she treated Lucy like crap.

I think that this I pretty good but try to edit it more? Some words weren't correct for the sentence (I think).