Dearest Santa I wish to see the main pair holding hands by end of 2023, no I change my mind o wish to see the main pair kissing by end of 2023. Yes dearest Santa is 2023, not 2022. I can wait, yes another year is fine, and yes just kissing is fine, that’s the best she can handle anyway and yes I am referring to the main pair that is tagged in the summary and I promise I be a gooooood reader :]

Does the speed up include the main pair holding hands? We do need a closet scene or a vampire Prince sweeping the petite Princess away from him!

god i love the concept of the cottage being just jaune and weiss sharing a house. Praying they move in together someday... someday.

They just missed a huge opportunity to bring the price down even further with the mention of the vampire attack. There being a threat of being murdered in your sleep by a vampire is usually accounted for when it comes to property value.

Soooo we not gonna bring up the blatant allowance of slavery to ozpin? including the mistreatment of them by government officials?

God i love alt forms man.

I trust port with my life honestly. Please don't betray me.

Bag of holding, worth 100% no regrets.

i'm... confused. Was this a dragon, or a TW3 wyvern. Because if it was the latter, then it was way too strong. If it was the former though, then i can understand.

Not even finished with the chapter yet, but god damn i love dragon abilities like what yang has. That shit is so cool, i wonder what the stats are.

Could just make round trips. Get a ton of loot, go back to base, restock, go back and get more. No reason to leave a tonne of valuables there.

Infusion is honestly a crazy ability, potentially OP depending on what kind of materials use. Like, imagine a dragon's tooth or claw, or any mythical beast. I'd love to see that

A vampire in the rempnants of a plauge ridden village... a vapirism plauge? please be so

So I'm guessing that a lot of these earlier chapters have either been revised or rewritten, because somethings quite frankly make absolutely no sense.

Jaunes whole motive for going to Beacon is for the chance to impress the king and become a knight, something that he dreams of and idolizes. Yet, the second he arrives in Vale he just starts to introduce himself as a knight to anyone he meets. Despite not having been knighted or any mention of that being his "Class". Its your world and you absolutely have the right to make it however you want, but it feels like this would be some sort of identity theft or impersonation and you would be punished for.

As the chapters continue the only time knights are being mentioned is when Jaune is critiquing them and generally speaking bad about them. Why would he want to become a knight if he has literally said nothing good or redeeming about them?

I really enjoy this story, but these inconsistencies make it very hard to read and also makes Jaune sound like a hypocrite.

Plant based zombies?