Well that's another great Chapter and as always I'm looking forward for the next one by the way

1. Hope Videl and Erasa managed to forgive each other and be friends again after the Hostage Situation. I wonder how Videl gonna react went she's find out Gohan was the Golden Fighter after he save her from Tao and Shen.

2. Looks like Babidi make his appearance early than expected, looks like Mercenary Tao and his brother Shen just become Babidi Minion's. I wonder who's gonna beat them? Hope it's Gohan or Gine since the two of them can't be corrupted by Babidi Magic due to their being Pure heart well except for Vegeta or Bardock which gonna happen during the Martial Arts Tournament and fighting Demon King Dabura.

Well that's another great Chapter and as always I'm looking forward for the next one by the way

1. Hope Videl and Erasa managed to forgive each other and be friends again after the Hostage Situation. I wonder how Videl gonna react went she's find out Gohan was the Golden Fighter after he save her from Tao and Shen

2. Looks like Babidi make his appearance early than expected, looks like Mercenary Tao and his brother Shen just become Babidi Minion's. I wonder who's gonna beat them? Gohan or Gine since the two can't be corrupted by Babidi Magic cause their heart are Pure well except for Vegeta which gonna happen during the Martial Arts Tournament and fighting Demon King Dabura

BannedUserName, the old chapter had a fragment of the outline in the end, so they remove it.

meh

Why did u re-upload it?

To Shen and Tao Pai Pai:
Oh, NOW YOU EFFED UP!

Sorry if I'm using guest version, but it won't let me write again on this page.

Anyway, I also wanted to point out about goku growing a beard along with Yamcha, maybe Tien might be doing the same maybe? I do think when they wake up, they should probably shave to be prepared,

And it looks like Lord Jaguar will be in this as well, wonder what's gonna be in it for him since, will he be making bio warriors, will he be working with people like Android 21, Dr. Hedo? Well guess we'll wait cause Mark sure does have many hated foes, and a particular one coming to the 25th WMAT

An excellent pair of fights to conclude things along with some very excellent character moments from the reveal of Pikkon's past (boy are things going to be awkward when he meets Turles again) to the Kais making up (and it being obvious that's going to be important when the Buu stuff officially starts). Very curious to see what the otherworld training is going to do for Goku and co. besides SSJ3. Very curious to see just how much all these changes are going to affect the Buu saga...which is ironic given TTS just finished its unconventional take on said saga XD

You know, this was more what I was hoping the Tournament of Power would be: a grand tournament of such a grand scale where all the non-Saiyan fighters could demonstrate their best in terms of skill. You continue to do both Yamcha and Tien well in this chapter and I can't wait to see what's in store in the next part.

I ended up figuring out Blue Rose's identity the more he talked during the fight, though given what we know about the remnant of the Red Ribbon Army thanks to Super Hero, I'm curious if this is going to come back later. Also good job in tying together the confusing Kai lore into something more coherent and matching with the stuff to come. Very curious to see what the tie breaker will be and how the thing with Pikkon is going to go.

We're back folks! But Zoinks! first Videl gets shot buy a thug and she's going to the hospital to get her shoulder fixed.

But wow, so the Tournament is in 3 months, I'm getting quite curious to where training goes from here. When all three of them thought 'Gohan killed Cell.' I thought wow, they figured it out a little earlier than I thought, but it seems they shrugged it off again as just a silly thought.

As for Erasa, man what a sad day it is for the gal, the moment she went all 'oh' and her shoulders slumped and started crying in front of Gohan while asking her to promise they'll care for each, welp I kinda figured a possible yet inevitable break up would happen, if it does happen I hope it's kind hearted. On the other hand I get she's worried and mad that Videl is pushing her life on the line, but I don't think it was right for her to use Miguel as an insult in front of Videl, than again it was also wrong for Videl to be rude as well.

I never expected Sharpener would be gay in this version, I was thinking Stencil was a girl, but I don't think it ever mentioned anything about Stencil being a girl, so I find this take on Sharpener a bit interesting and funny due to Gohan's reaction.

Videl, well she's very reckless, yet also very tough and brave, if not smart aleck, she's the type of girl that will risk her life for others safety and that's what I repsect about her, she's cool but she's reckless, and what Gohan said about her is true she's stronger than her dad for sure, but I don't think that's gonna stop her from wanting to join the World Tournament somehow, and the way she loses a bit of her hair, well I guess that's one way to have a good reason for a pixie cut

And well Babidi really is getting serious about creating a universal army even amongst evil that are weak. But to my surprise is that for all the men with the strange 'Markings' on their heads it's surprising how weak they we're against Videl, and well because her name is basically Devil, her aura amongst the scum is that of a demon punishing them, though I do wonder how long it will be before they wake and they may get slightly stronger.

But boy oh boy, it looks like Babidi even added the Crane geezers, now robots. and the fact that Shen becomes a robotic spider with only his scarred head remaining is disturbing. But wow though, it looks like Videl remebers the name Tao Pai Pai from the 23rd, but it's too bad she's been taken hostage by Crane members, but it does seem that this may have some good connections since Mark's teacher and fellow students we're killed by Tao over a food bill disagreement, but hopefully Saiyaman saves the last of the senior Satan dojo members from the monsters

However what struck me the most is when they decided to go after kindergarteners, and when Commissioner Tomato brought up Gine, I'm still wondering if Videl will get even more curious since the teacher is called Miss Son Gine, that same name Gohan and Goku have,

Speaking of Tomato, it really is quite terrifying that she's being dead serious in these situations, it's basically saying shit's going down for real and I'm gonna say, if Gine sensei finds out and probably looks at the news about her students getting captured by these 'cults' with M's on their forehead, for sure she's gonna get pissed, but I think I'm also gonna predict that Goten and Chika might follow pursuit as they might have some friends captured there possibly.

And huh, so Monty Cash actually appears, and he goes to the gym now, interesting, I wonder how he'll progress(he's one of my top ships for Erasa should the possible inevitable happen).

Lots of drama going on around here, and the rise of this mysterious army with tattoos on their heads is just beginning, but it looks like we'll have to find out what happens.

Very curious to see how the Vegeta moustache saga will go from here XD

Well, that was an interesting pair of losses for King Kai's team; Tien in a more conventional way while Piccolo's was unconventional. Very curious to see how the two grudge matches concerning Goku go.

Great Chapter

Brgc