Reviews for Eye Of The Storm
Katescats chapter 20 . 8/20/2014
Hi just read your story it was very good.
Guest chapter 20 . 3/11/2014
You know, on your profile, you say that you use a beta, but your erratic writing style proves problematic. You could, and this is just a suggestion, use a beta for once a story is finished. You would just need to have the person copy, paste, correct and send you the corrected document which you then upload.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Your beta didn't get rid of all your spelling mistakes. S/he missed a few, at least in this chapter.

several triangular peaces of metal - should be pieces.
I know this is complete, but you can still edit the story.
darkfinder chapter 20 . 11/23/2011
to bad it's over and nothing happened between them .
darkfinder chapter 19 . 11/23/2011
wonder how they get back .
darkfinder chapter 18 . 11/23/2011
what they got her .
darkfinder chapter 17 . 11/23/2011
they can use DYLAN against her now . if they find out what she is .
darkfinder chapter 16 . 11/23/2011
funny stuff . got to wonder what she has in the bag .
darkfinder chapter 15 . 11/23/2011
will they actually admitte to each other .
darkfinder chapter 14 . 11/23/2011
funny stuff .
darkfinder chapter 13 . 11/23/2011
funny stuff . think she get bored .
darkfinder chapter 12 . 11/23/2011
that was so funny when ROMMIE shows up .
darkfinder chapter 11 . 11/23/2011
would they actually help them .
darkfinder chapter 10 . 11/23/2011
what no ROMMIE .
darkfinder chapter 9 . 11/23/2011
man things are moving fast .
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