Una de las mejores historias.

This is really forced lmao. You made Naruto spineless just so he could only realize he wanted to stay after he's already in the fucking portal? He would have decided if he wanted to fucking go or fucking stay in a heartbeat. Also, who made Sakura the boss? Oh, the writer.

Regarding the AN to trust you: no.

Ignoring the whole breaking the fourth wall bit as it breaks immersion..I enjoyed Naruko aha! Izumi is adorable. Their whole interaction was pretty great between the alternate selves. I'll see about possibly checking out future Naruto stories. Never seen mha and never had the urge to either, but good luck on those and any original story(ies) you may write!

Ahaha he elopes too xD

Sad he doesn't get to meet Naruko :/ But very happy he gets to meet his parents :3 Madara really shouldn't have been trying to threaten his mother though, especially over something so small as believing her son about being her son. I mean she believed him about time traveling without much issue no?

Wooo, nice for him being with Madara again and meeting his mother c: Uhh, Jeans are okay but dresses or short shorts are wayyy better :P

So why don't they just go through the portal again?

Naruto really should not have touched the portal ffs.

I picked this story out randomly from searching crack ships on reddit, so glad I found it. Lovely weird story with a ship I never thought i'd push for but I loved it.

Sakura showing up kinda ruined it for me, nice idea though

Every time I look back at this fic it's so astounding how it went from funny and decent to being complete garbage just through the introduction of one character.

I don't even hate Sakura I like her, but somehow she's the source of every single awful thing about this story, like how she gets treated as being right that they need to go back to the future and restore the original timeline like it hasn't been completely screwed over by what Naruto has already done like getting rid of the guy who we can only assume steals Madara's identity, along with his relationship fem Madara, to the fact the story for no reason decided that time traveling somehow gave Sakura big breasts and thought mentioning them every other sentence was the peak of comedy , to the asspull ending with Sasuke changing everything, and her "romance" with Tobirama that came out of nowhere, served no purpose and was clearly just there to pretend she got something of a satisfactory ending.

Wow! This was an amazing binge read. I love female Madara and I love what you did with her

And just had to jump back to this chapter. I find it ridiculously creative that our explanation for the gender bent Madara is that the female version is the original and this other guy used some Mangekyo ability to take female Madaras identity and life for his own, making him the actual antagonist we saw in the show. It's so unique, and left me rethinking scenes from the show through an interesting perspective. I can't believe this wasn't more delved into but I had to come back and comment on that little detail.

Okay this being the Minato from the movie timeline in the lost tower is the best part of the second half of this story.

Personally I would have preferred a stay in the past fic as it stands now, but here we are in the future and it's wrong lol. I'm still in board for it, it's just more off the rails, it went places I wasn't expecting. Frankly I like Sakura and how you portrayed her here, I think it did exactly what you needed it to, and I find myself wanting to read the same story but from her perspective to be honest. One of my new favorite authors, I seem to enjoy everything I read it's written by you.