Reviews for Try not to Fuck up The future, Warning: Future gets fucked
Rainbow Dum Dum chapter 14 . 5/31/2019
not gunna lie, I fucking loved this
cloudstrife117 chapter 11 . 5/28/2019
Welp that sucked donkey balls, good to know you are a assume Dan and avoid your stories. Thanks for wasting my time
Olly chapter 9 . 5/17/2019
That was pretty weak, frankly I'm disappointed that you pull such a fake plot twist. It really felt artificial.
Plus I'm sorry but I can't pass the fact that your story have such a major plot hole. Why would Madara cooperate with them ? That just doesn't make any sense. Hell, she could have easily blackmail Naruto into staying with her by making it a condition of stopping the fight against the Senju.
Olly chapter 8 . 5/17/2019
Hum... I don't understand Sakura's argument, isn't their future already gone ? I mean they need Madara to cooperate with them for the future to happen exactly as they remember it. She can just refuse to create Konoha and continue her war against the Senju or take her clan and go somewhere else and it will prevent the future Naruto and Sakura came from from happening. So how can Sakura hope for their future to happen again when it entirely depend on the acts of someone who had no interest to let it happen in the first place ?
Guest chapter 14 . 5/4/2019
Great fic, really enjoyed the read
Rongis chapter 7 . 5/5/2019
Nuh you can never fix a shattered plate to it's original form goodbye.
Rake1810 chapter 14 . 4/28/2019
I've read most of your stories. Not sure how i missed this one. Hilarious the whole way through.
Rake1810 chapter 12 . 4/28/2019
Overprotective Dad says what?

Hilarious story the whole way through.
ArtistGamerMage chapter 6 . 4/25/2019
so I'm guessing the implication in this story is that Sanosuke killed the real Madara, and then impersonated madara
Kagami420 chapter 14 . 4/18/2019
Love this story
victorsan12345 chapter 14 . 4/15/2019
This was amazing.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/1/2019
I really wished someone would have punched Sakura in the face at least once in the story
Exploding sword chapter 14 . 3/23/2019
Honestly I don't blame you for wanting to take a break. I left the fandom after a while ,but I still will read some occasional fics from authors and try and give some a read. You actually become one of the few authors I still read Naruto stories from ,and will still read from even without you being in the fandom.
Sorry it taken so long for me to say this ,but life is one of those things that keep me from reading and I just now read the end. Besides you probably get compliments all the time with your art of story telling. Still credit should be given when credits due. I'll continue to support your stories they've always cheered me up.
- a person who should review more often.
helrio uzugaku chapter 14 . 3/20/2019
Ok I'll admit it, that was fucking fantastic. I'm still chuckling over it all.

So many clich├Ęs that I shouldn't be ok with but totally AM because of how unique you made use of them. I commend you, I tip my hat, hell, congrats! Personality is off in comparison to how you said she was going to he but I liked this Madara better than the one you mentioned before.

Sucks that it's over but all good things must come to an end.

Th ed re definitely could have been things you could have done better.

For example, Madara, the male one was obviously not the one that is probably doing her damndest to ensure triplets with naruto right now. The madara Naruto faught in his timeline was obviously...yomonusuke? Can't remember the guys name properly, didn't have enough story time to remember it. Madara is sharp, very sharp, so when the time came for them to open the portal to the future I'm shocked Madara didn't bring up the fact Naruto already irrevocably altered the timeline by preventing the Madara wannabe from successfully stealing Madara's power. Without the bastard taking the reigns of the Uchiha clan things never would have spiraled out of control for the future. Madara should have been sharp enough, as you've described, considering she's quick to bounce back from any and almost all situation at the drop of a hat, to bring up the fact things never would have been the same as they were before anyway.

Damn time travel makes my head hurt. I'm confusing myself but I think you get the picture.

Nonetheless i enjoyed the fic anyway, so thank you for such a good read. Good luck on any future projects.
Char blade chapter 14 . 3/13/2019
Found ur story on the game challenge page. Your fic was great in the beginning but got dumb really quick.
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