Can u add more to the story? Like after he recovered or how he recovered?

Not sure if you have forgotten about this, but keep writing! Don't give up! I really enjoyed reading this and the suspense was real. Don't hesitate to continue it if you have more ideas. I would definitely read more! Although the paragraphing is a little odd, it's an easy fix and I would love to read more. Keep it up!

i love this! but viktor's right, the way you paragraph it makes it in the middle of a sentence, so i suggest not spacing. other than that, it's written very well!

It's great, thought the text is i divided in a way wich makes it harder to read.
Please continue