|Reviews for Imperator: Vas Bellicosum|
| lostxinxthexdarkness chapter 26 . 2/28
Absolutely loved this fic, I'm excited to go and read the sequel now!
| Batsbicycle chapter 11 . 2/13
I imagined it being closer to 50 metres. But I could understand making it smaller.
| IvyAntionette chapter 20 . 2/7
I'm actually really sorry that I haven't taken the time to review before.
I'd just like to say that you are ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. Even though you do have to make slight modifications to the characters, they still feel like the same characters. And while normally I'd hate that you used Preyna and not Percabeth, I understand it and it's not the worst thing in the world. AND REYNA STILL FEELS LIKE REYNA! So yeah. You do a really good job making me wanting to keep reading :D
Also you have really good writing in general, which is something that can sometimes be hard to find on FF.
P.S. I think you meant 'Othrys', not 'Orthys'.
| Nobody chapter 1 . 1/10
Whoaaa! Now. That. Is. A. Good. Story.
| Pygmy Hippo chapter 26 . 1/2
Such a cool story! I really liked that you were able to mature Octavion a little bit and how you showed that even with Percy there Jason still had his moments. I also love that he and Jason get along. On to read the next one!
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/21/2020
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/21/2020
She is not being frank, she's being Vanessa
| meee chapter 12 . 12/13/2020
Well, that's angsty and shitty of Jupiter. Great chapter! 3
| Xaverian chapter 20 . 11/14/2020
ngl... he probably would've prefered the broken jaw. he can soak and water and it'll heal, the tooth not so much
| Gabriel Martins chapter 25 . 11/13/2020
FOR THE GOD SAKE, this is perfect. damn I love this fic to the beginning till the end. I just love it.
| Gabriel Martins chapter 21 . 11/12/2020
Oh gosh that hurts. a lot.
| inayeth chapter 26 . 11/7/2020
This is crazy good.
I mean. Crazy. Good.
The fight with Krios was kinda anticlimatic, but everything else?
I’m a big fan.
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/31/2020
| ACI100 chapter 12 . 10/28/2020
“At three different point” should be “at three different points”
“about argue with” should be “about to argue”
“shuddered breath” should be “shuddering breath”
| ACI100 chapter 11 . 10/28/2020
“coming to a stop at Percy feet” should be “Percy’s feet”
“went form pure salt” should be “from”
“How in his father’s name want it dead” should be “wasn’t”