Reviews for The Worst Prisoner: The illusion of separation (Book 2)
Sauwk chapter 18 . 11/6/2019
That was pretty good, now just waiting for the next book
Sauwk chapter 9 . 11/5/2019
I laugh so hard!
Guest chapter 11 . 10/28/2019
Dear god... I dont think ive ever laughed this hard in my life as i have for the last couple of chapters. Words cannot express how much i love your writing and your story. I need more. I eagerly await book 3.
chalicity chapter 18 . 10/21/2019
Thank you for such a wonderful story! You are a fantastic writer, and I particularly love how you really dived into the characters' personalities and explored why they think or act the way they do. I enjoyed reading your authors notes and explanations as much as I did the funny Gaang interactions and squishy Zutara feels. Bravo! I hope this gets picked up and to rest more of your fascinating story.
Guest chapter 18 . 10/21/2019
I LOVE YOUR WORKS! Just discovered and been reading all of them. I just wanna say thank you for filling my days with laughter and thank you for all the time and effort put into these. Can't wait for the next book :):)
Makdawg52 chapter 18 . 10/15/2019
Can’t wait for the next one!
StrawberryKris chapter 18 . 10/7/2019
I just wanted to say thank you for the gift of this book. I spent all day reading it, and loved it. I can't wait for book 3. I wish you the best of luck with your child, and hope your pregnancy was kind!
Pentastic chapter 18 . 10/4/2019
Your story is great as always. I love the Canon parallels and the increased character development. I am also really enjoying seeing your views on Azula. it makes a lot of sense for he as a character motivation. Congratulations on your pregnancy. I hope everything goes really well. I look forward to reading book 3.
Pentastic chapter 18 . 10/4/2019
Your story is great as always. I love the Canon parallels and the increased character development. I am also really enjoying seeing your views on Azula. it makes a lot of sense for he as a character motivation. Congratulations on your pregnancy. I hope everything goes really well. I look forward to reading book 3.
The Jabberwock of OZ chapter 18 . 9/2/2019
This entire series is freaking bananas to me
I love your work
I started reading Today and now its... around 9:00 pm or...uhh hold on... 2100 hours...-cough-
i freaking like this because you really do mess with the characters so much it feels like
George R.R. Martin lite
You don't kill any one, but every time it feels like Katara and Zuko are gonna have a chance to really start their relationship you stab 67 different holes and pull them apart
It's honestly kinda funny in a dark humor sort of way

So my prediction for the next season of your story is... that Azula will work a way to manipulate Zukos protective feelings towards her and ultimatly Challenge Ozai early
I can see Azula leading Zuko to challenging Ozai
Well great series my dude
anais chapter 18 . 8/28/2019
scusa per il mio inglese, mi sono fatta aiutare da google traslate... inanzi tutto congratulazioni per l'arrivo del tuo bambino. complimenti per questa meravigliosa fanfiction, mi ha letteralmente tenuta incollata spero che tu possa trovare il tempo per scrivere il terzo libro. ti aspetto
iChaos chapter 18 . 8/18/2019
Absolutely fantastic storytelling. I sincerely hope that you find the time and motivation to finish the tale. If not, I wish you the best of luck with Parenthood and thank you for sharing this fic.
DrowsyBadger chapter 18 . 8/18/2019
I'm just here to say that I found this series when searching for good Avatar AU fics the day before yesterday (bc I'm curious what kind of AUs I can find, and bc UA usually mean Zutara and I like Zutara) and I fell in love with this story/the prequel from the first paragraph. I love how you merged humour, romance and serious parts together in such a beautiful way. You can have me laughing my butt off one second and moping about why Ozai is such an arse the next. I love your "little" ramblings at the end, and how you explain your thoughts behind just about everything you do. And Jet being bi. Bi Jet made for some hilarious moments.
Also, congratulations on your first child! I wish you the best of luck!

Now, don't mind me casually reading all your Avatar fics.
SeistraChan chapter 15 . 8/17/2019
I seriously live this story! The amount of work and thought put into the storyline and characters is never cease to amaze me. I need to start reading it from the beginning once more! I miss the early awkward Zutara moments really
GeekStereotype.1 chapter 18 . 7/28/2019
I have really enjoyed both of these series, I can appreciate the fact that you sometimes skip on the scenes that would otherwise remain unchanged from the show, as it’s just easier to read in general because we can fill in the blanks.
I really hope you continue with this series as I have really enjoyed it and I am certain others have to. Thank you.
Also you won’t believe how hard it I see to find good fan fiction with near perfect grammar and spelling *faints* thanks for your thoroughness in that regard too.
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