Reviews for Expect The Unexpected
Guest chapter 20 . 9/14
Update please.
malexandria chapter 19 . 4/16
I like the stiry, but Harry’s attitude towards Ron killing Hermione and joining Voldemorte is just dumb as H. It is and your explanations is nonsense when you compare Harry’s canon forgiveness to this story. You can’t start your story off with such a major incident and then just shrug it off and pretend like it meant nothing. I hate when authors do this craphave characters do vile things for shock value but then don’t follow up because, reasons… This chapter was just hard to stomach.
Tlyna52 chapter 20 . 1/1
Damn I had just checked back and see it has been along time since your last update so I guess you have abandoned the story. Too bad as it was very good and deserved to be completed. I wish you would come back to it.
Village-Mystic chapter 18 . 4/8/2022
Wouldn't the teachers recognize the stasis charm at this point? Stressful moments, though. Not thinking through everything clearly. I though you meant Justine was dead and dismembered by Fluffy.
Village-Mystic chapter 16 . 4/8/2022
Okay some interesting thoughts both in the chapter and the author's note. I didn't quite get what the professors told Harry and Hermione what were happening, but the characters of Harry and Hermione didn't either so that kind of worked. Honestly, I had not looked at the Harry seeks to forgive it will give him family, I thought that perhaps Harry was getting a little mind whammied or potioned to forgive and/or associate with Ron.
Village-Mystic chapter 15 . 4/8/2022
Unsure about this branch of the alternate plot, but that can be a good thing - lack of predictability. Harry and Hermione are learning that lesson, too. That they can't predict and control everything.
Village-Mystic chapter 13 . 4/8/2022
I liked the choice of using the back yard, and that Sirius was open to the impossible options, once the improbable occurred. Plus, family love.
Village-Mystic chapter 11 . 4/8/2022
The story continues to be very good. I see getting out a few years earlier and not being on the run as a dog has done wonders for Sirius' ability to bounce back. He probably still needs a mind healer and a food/potion regimin, but perhaps not so gaunt and haunted. Yes, Harry is jumping the gun about trying out of seeker before his first flying lesson, but it did seem to help over all.
Village-Mystic chapter 9 . 4/8/2022
Bad choice and bad consequence. It was like double or nothing on getting away with Crabbe and Goyle.
Village-Mystic chapter 7 . 4/8/2022
So a little confused if they took the letters to show someone or left the letters on them to be discovered. Meanwhile, meant to say earlier on, way to show Pureblood predjudices with Ron and Percy, feeling it would be okay to snap the wands of a half blood and muggle born on the first day of school.
Village-Mystic chapter 6 . 4/8/2022
Wow. Good going with unexpected plot points, but I'm sorry that Hermione got beat up. Also good going with showing Hermione has enough context to reason out Harry's motivations instead of taking what he's saying personally. Real eleven year olds usually don't have the context unless they have been heavily mentored by an adult or older sibling.
Village-Mystic chapter 5 . 4/8/2022
I'm enjoying the alternate plot beats, character moments, and dialogs.
Village-Mystic chapter 3 . 4/7/2022
Very interesting, after asking Hagrid to come early, it looked like he wouldn't come at all.
Village-Mystic chapter 1 . 4/7/2022
I am guessing Harry will have the trunk during the muggle world time, and maybe Hermione will hold it during the school time?
Annoymous the 21 chapter 16 . 4/6/2022
Well that's kind of true regarding harry in authors nktes so how about an unfortuante accident and SI insertion to fix it?
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