Reviews for Spiritual Love (Luigi x Booette)
Abrahan v chapter 1 . 10/1/2018
Luigi x Bossette make a nice couple and I'm waiting for the second chapter and continue so I'll support you :3 3
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2018
Sounds like an interesting idea.
Black Gold Saya chapter 1 . 10/3/2018
About chapter 2 (and even this chapter) it should be;
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Instead of;
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C0rrupt3dSpy chapter 2 . 10/2/2018
I wanna see where this goes, its hard to find boo-related stories
Black Gold Saya chapter 2 . 10/2/2018
Line break after "fire flower" Line break when someone new starts talking. Ex:
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"Ah Luigi." The professor said "What are you doing here my boy?"
"Well" Luigi replied "I'm-a-here to talk to a ghost."
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Do this every time someone different starts talking. Line break after "the little window"

General issues, a few typos and sometimes you don't say who's talking. Nothing that can't be fixed in just a few minutes and I promise you your readers will appreciate it because as is, its kinda hard to read
DivineDemon1 chapter 1 . 10/1/2018
this seems interesting.
PuzzleMaster1998 chapter 1 . 10/1/2018
Not bad. Somw grammatical Torres, but that's it. A good story idea.
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