Amazing. How you explain the magic Harry used is very well written. Love it.

I like ruthless Harry, well done.

your writing has become trite and uninteresting, there seems to be a dearth of imagination and intellectual maturity in your work

this is so cringe it was somewhat intersting but now harry is the triwizard champion nice work just like the million other fanfics on this site

Bastards

Its allways so sad to read about the Halloween and Harry's parents, it is good that he have Tonks with him.
Dumbledore is right bastard though.

Wow, just amazing ending there.

Well thats what Harry gets for ignoring Hermione and not apologizing. And Snape is greasy git.

Poor Harry, and Hermione. That part about melons was hilarious.

Nice chapter

I like this Dumbledore, he is well written. He is good, even if he have some faults.

Just wow, love it.

"Then, he heard the sail of the Durmstrang ship pierce the water within the Black Lake, and his focused snapped.

The swirling vortex of magical energy that was once so flowing, became chaos. A pulse of flame shot out, wild and uncontrollable, around the room. Lightning charged through the air, tracing unnatural paths as it flickered through the air. A blip in concentration and the magic became a law into itself.

Harry wrestled with the magic, forcing the arcane power in the air to bend to his command. His whole body torqued as he fought the nature of what he himself had created. His arms shook with tension as he dragged the magic back under his command. Slowly, the wild torrent of nature fell under his control once more, the world around him halting in its attempt to rip his life from him. One blip in concentration was all it took to almost take his life from him. One couldn't afford to lose track of the magic's nature, not even for a second."

I just love this so much, the way you explain this amazing fest of magic is simply wonderfull. And Tonks, can't forget her.

I have read it one before, but dont remember much, but I know I loved it. Still very well written.

god please not hermione, i don't care about hermione, oh jesus, allah, budhha someone, i don't want to read anymore hermione, why make ron a dufus but then stick haryy with hermione, oh god save this forgotten soul from the horror of inadequacy and trite machination!