Reviews for Flap Jack
1477166 chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Jeni2 chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
This is brilliant, you have captured John's and Aeryn's characters really well.

Lots of hugs 'n' bugs,

Jeni (and the mysterious rubber chicken called Scorpius)
longnite chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
Very, very well done!

Its a shame the series did not do a better job on issues such as this one. Your interaction of the two involved rang very true to form for both. Great story!
liz chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
They did such a good job of ignoring that little fact that I almost forgot it happened. I'm glad you wrote this. It reminded me of that aspect of things. The conversation seemed like one that John and Aeryn would really and should have had given the situation. Are you sure you didn't manage to snag a copy of some cut scenes?
seva chapter 1 . 4/18/2003
Oh, we could only have wished to have seen this on screen. But then, they couldn't have kept those two apart as long as they did.

Very nicely written scene.