Reviews for Titanfall |
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TSFreedom chapter 25 . 5/30/2019 Great chapter . |
Noobody77 chapter 1 . 5/26/2019 Poorly written and confusing with an unoriginal plot to boot. 3/10 find something else to read. |
firelordeg chapter 24 . 5/23/2019 thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows |
Shivers82 chapter 24 . 5/23/2019 Nice to see Taylor and Amy getting a little more in-depth. Great chapter and looking forward to more. |
TSFreedom chapter 24 . 5/23/2019 Great chapter . |
Glorandar chapter 23 . 5/19/2019 I am really enjoying this story. Thanks for sharing! |
DarkStrider chapter 6 . 5/18/2019 Unfortunately this stor has fallen into the most common failing of fanfiction: everything gets solved easy peasy. No properly paced and developed conflict, poor character ‘voice’ and lots of exposition. I’d take this back to the drawing board. |
firelordeg chapter 23 . 5/16/2019 thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows |
TSFreedom chapter 23 . 5/16/2019 Great chapter . |
TheLastGarou chapter 23 . 5/16/2019 The Obaasan Collective strikes again! _ ...And suddenly I have an image of the Obaasan *scolding* Scion into submission! XD |
Chrome Cheetah chapter 10 . 5/13/2019 The pace of this story is way too quick and reads rather weird. You might want to consider a rewrite in the future, maybe get someone else to help proofread. Definitely an interesting idea though. |
KongouBongo chapter 22 . 5/9/2019 Riley is always fun, looking forward to more thanks for the chapter |
TSFreedom chapter 22 . 5/9/2019 Awesome chapter . |
firelordeg chapter 22 . 5/9/2019 Thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story I'm loving it please continue to update as soon as life allows |
firelordeg chapter 21 . 4/26/2019 thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows |