Sooo, is it alive? Please be alive.

This chapter is a crunchy slog. It's all made up so there is very little point In going into excruciating detail for paragraphs at a time.

I really loved the story and while I haven’t read it since your last update I just got an idea. I’m half asleep and only have the outline of your story in mind but the thought suddenly came to me so I have to share it with you:
What if Ego’s death takes the ability of him temporarily BUT he learns to basically use his experience and partly celestial gene material to form chi into his old energy.
Like I said I’m basically sleeping so make whatever you want from that.

loving it so far

Была надежда што гг подождёт лет 6 - 8 но облом

good

Short but it's something can't wait for the other chapters.

I think this is the weakest chapter so far. Nathan is acting too much like a child.

Awww, he made a friend! And he did it in an ethical, responsible, careful way with OVERSIGHT!

I'm so proud of your little self-insert. *sniff*

Second time reading the story, thank you so much for writing it. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Really enjoyed the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.

So gay people have to be bitches? Tf is wrong with you.

This and ur naruto story finished today both r fire keep updating dawg

I correct my previous statement 4/5 of the story are recap copy/paste and author notes.

Fml, the author notes in this story are nearly 3/4 of each chapter.