"he was pretty sure he could move them but didn't want to" ?

wheres the pushing your limits? riding the edge?! you could have written a really cool scene about izuku pushing to the very limit, to bare move this last, titanic piece of machinery

it could have been a mini climax for a man vs self kind of moment, it could have really mattered.

but you didn't want to? what a clearly missed opportunity

a few things:

him 'awakening' his mothers power but stronger is a little bullshiiite but not outside of normal anime shenanigans

allmight being so suprised he understood the quirk so quickly is OOC. its stated he got it pretty instinctively in canon, and was surprised OG midoria had the issues he did

there are some changes from cannon that seem to be 'just cause'. a sentence or two like 'this happened' or 'i thought about it and changed my mind' with no context or prompting. all might being responsible enough to bring in mom-adoria is good, him pulling it out of his ass in a dialogue is not

there are some dynamics you rush through to get to the good bit faster. the izuku/katsuki and the toshinori/inko character relationships are pretty skimmed over. this first chapter is written like you made a bulletin list for how powerful midoria gets early, and barely filled in the gaps

its a good read, the world and characters are a bit shallow.

Not that Im arguing with or anything, but they are called villain points because of how many villain robots the kids destroy.

I like this version of All Might! Promethius must have been his Vigilante name before Nana passed OFA on to him.

Cosmyk Angel

Personally, I like this story amigo, it deals with a lot of things that other writers don't. Plus, it's entertaining.

HISASHI IS SO CUTE!
INKO YOU LUCKY BITCH!
DORKY DADS ARE SO MUCH BETTER THAN STRONG, SERIOUS DADS IMO!

I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE HISASHI'S PERSONALITY!
I'M SO GLAD IT'S /HIM/ THAT IZUKU GETS THE MUMBLING THING FROM AND THE GIRLFRIEND QUESTION IS THE BEST!
ALREADY, I CAN TELL HE'S A GREAT FUCKIN DAD AND I LOVE HIM!

Mother-Fucking Nineteen Thousand meters

Ugh. Review corner is too fucking annoying. Get a proper forum and put that garbage there, away from sight.

If the law is that narrow minded it is overs that it's the population control laws.! Witch means they would a low death & marred too take place.!

omake reminds me of the snes game earthbound.

Kanker sisters, ed edd and eddy.

Huh that was different way to deal with stain

Quite happy that this is getting continued this would not have been the first fic to get knocked into an abandoned status by the tournament and the Stain arcs. Glad to see that this might reach past that.

Lost to a technicality they didnt even explain before the fights. What a cop-out.