This is an interesting premise, but aside from the prologue, you've only been rehashing canon so far.

It's also not written very well. You rush through everything too quickly, and you have a terrible habit of separating complete sentences with just commas.

Maybe it gets better in future chapters, but I have to stop here.

Quite fast paced but it's foe the next step!

this story is amazing. I've read it before but I didn't leave a review, so here you go. Also I would love to see his Human Mother be in his original world, alive once more, just to see on how he became, and would be proud of him. Also she'll probably rip him a new one for having a Harem but will be fine with it later on. Anyways I love this story, and please update this story please, it's sooo good!

I love this story and it is so different, I hope you keep writing and posting new chapters.

Nice

Hmm

please update soon

i really love this take on the story, keep up the good work!

Please update soon.

Daang, this is a pretty good fic! Gonna follow this on my Account cuz I wanna see more of this GoD's adventure! :3

You said level fifty super warrior at first, and now the second time Gelberger says it, he's a level 30 super warrior? BE CONSISTENT, MAN! Is he thirty or fifty? :/

Okay I am loving the way he is using his magic with the info he has from the other world. I will say though with how they reacted to him cleaning really fast I would have thought you would have the react the same when he changed the room. Other than that great chapter and keep up the good work.

Hmm. Interesting start but the amount of detail you put in it has made it sound super interesting. I can't wait to read more.

Awesome chapter

great great