this fic still pisses me off so much, it's great but it sucks and i love it but i despise it and i mean this in the best/worst way possible
there's so much wasted potential and questionable writing choices that i cant help but feel irritated but even then i can't help but like this literary torture device

This shit just got stupid real quick

Are you forgetting that the gods took magic away from the people

pls what did the Ici demon say after saying hello little mage?

Summer might be no a pedophile but we aaaaaall nooow that Ozpin's always get his hand in the KIIIIIIIDS!

You’ve started too early, memory creation/ access shouldn’t be possible before the age of 3, that’s the best time to insert an adult mind, but it would also provide a debuff to intelligence based stats since her brain is smaller,
sending anybody out before the age of 5 is just ridiculous to picture, do you have any idea how small a 2 year old actually is? they go up to your knee, a solid punt would be enough to send them flying no matter the strength as it’s a weight and leverage issue, imagining a toddler using a gun without similarly going flying is ridiculous, they weigh about the same as your arm and look what happens to that when you deal with weapon recoil

man you just really want to make this story dark and miserable, it's kinda of shit because of it there's only a few moments of happiness and even then it's uneventful. Plus the Mc just act lack luster rarely showing any emotions and just being a prick/dislikable to everyone.

so MC's basically became heartless only caring for rose which is dumb like one death and becomes a emo prick who does things for the greater good' even if it's just for himself.

mhmm idk if this little interaction in the story brings up another reincarnated dude/chick but if it does I just hope they die right away. two reincarnated people is just as bad as adding a party system too me.

I know this story is completed, but the copied part is around where Abyss Is walking into the room with Ruby and Raven.

Make a metal body for the oc like penny

Needs a slash tag since he’s banging tai

Sig Figs are indeed gay as shit my guy

I honestly thought at first that these little time stamps were the time passing, lol I was confused as hell on why he's still 3 years old after 6 years passing XD

Okay, I will honestly say I expected this to be like the DxD story which didn't really grab my attention, mainly for the exact fact that it was set in DxD.

But wow, I really thoroughly enjoyed this little side-story. I don't care that it doesn't do anything for the plot, having Abyss teaching randomly seems like an absolute blast .