Reviews for A Wizard's Game
The Hootsman chapter 1 . 5/15
this fic still pisses me off so much, it's great but it sucks and i love it but i despise it and i mean this in the best/worst way possible
there's so much wasted potential and questionable writing choices that i cant help but feel irritated but even then i can't help but like this literary torture device
Freddielebron chapter 10 . 5/9
This shit just got stupid real quick
Gear master chapter 3 . 4/25
Are you forgetting that the gods took magic away from the people
poreytor chapter 24 . 3/25
pls what did the Ici demon say after saying hello little mage?
poreytor chapter 3 . 3/22
Summer might be no a pedophile but we aaaaaall nooow that Ozpin's always get his hand in the KIIIIIIIDS!
Geek-God of Speed chapter 1 . 2/5
You’ve started too early, memory creation/ access shouldn’t be possible before the age of 3, that’s the best time to insert an adult mind, but it would also provide a debuff to intelligence based stats since her brain is smaller,
sending anybody out before the age of 5 is just ridiculous to picture, do you have any idea how small a 2 year old actually is? they go up to your knee, a solid punt would be enough to send them flying no matter the strength as it’s a weight and leverage issue, imagining a toddler using a gun without similarly going flying is ridiculous, they weigh about the same as your arm and look what happens to that when you deal with weapon recoil
22thodge chapter 15 . 1/24
man you just really want to make this story dark and miserable, it's kinda of shit because of it there's only a few moments of happiness and even then it's uneventful. Plus the Mc just act lack luster rarely showing any emotions and just being a prick/dislikable to everyone.
22thodge chapter 14 . 1/24
so MC's basically became heartless only caring for rose which is dumb like one death and becomes a emo prick who does things for the greater good' even if it's just for himself.
22thodge chapter 14 . 1/24
mhmm idk if this little interaction in the story brings up another reincarnated dude/chick but if it does I just hope they die right away. two reincarnated people is just as bad as adding a party system too me.
Guest chapter 32 . 1/7
I know this story is completed, but the copied part is around where Abyss Is walking into the room with Ruby and Raven.
Bokunoherogamer chapter 7 . 12/21/2021
Make a metal body for the oc like penny
Gnormann chapter 8 . 12/10/2021
Needs a slash tag since he’s banging tai
RomanAi chapter 12 . 12/8/2021
Sig Figs are indeed gay as shit my guy
seanedwardfaren1 chapter 4 . 11/24/2021
I honestly thought at first that these little time stamps were the time passing, lol I was confused as hell on why he's still 3 years old after 6 years passing XD
Kaiimei chapter 48 . 11/21/2021
Okay, I will honestly say I expected this to be like the DxD story which didn't really grab my attention, mainly for the exact fact that it was set in DxD.

But wow, I really thoroughly enjoyed this little side-story. I don't care that it doesn't do anything for the plot, having Abyss teaching randomly seems like an absolute blast .
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