Well this is a very fun ride. I always loved adventures and werewolves. The story is very well written and my only complaint is the cliffhangers but what would we do without cliffhanger-chan

Another enjoyable chapter.

Oh I like this I like this a lot

Hans let her to die in order to pin her death on Elsa?! Whereis he now and why isn't he getting the shit beaten out of him?

I... cannot think of anything meaningful to contribute.

Good luck.

Oh and also I had to 'HNNGH' a bit when they were dancing together. Now that's the stuff! So much left to come but damn was that hot. Elsa is a really good character to project a public Dominating persona (especially in modern AUs), and Anna is so sweet when she follows Elsa's lead.

I suspect that later on the roles might do some switching once Elsa's insecurities come out! Anna is such a strong person to lean on in private, so caring and understanding.

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Omg I'm so glad I found this! I love this story, and your writing is terrific! Really sorry to have seen that you lost your work at one point, I know how tough it can be to have to start over. I hope it's not too much of a problem for you.

I'm *super* excited to read more, what a relationship you're building between Elsa and Anna, and so much drama to explore too. It's great! Thank you for writing this, the fics with a cool, significant plot (non-humans) to them while also exploring the character relationships are the best.

Very much intrigued by Anna, what exactly is her power and how is it going to work. And how powerful will she be! Good job teasing it so far, I'm down for the foreshadowing. I especially like it when the two of them are hashing out a situation together (like the forest or discussing how Anna felt resisting the empath), can't wait for more.

You're a great writer, thank you again and I look forward to future updates.

Good story. Sucks about your computer.

Your writing technique feels more polished than before. Congratulations.

Soooo, I guess Hans sees something neither of them realises :p. I hope your computer doesn't crash again, mine crashed like half an hour ago but nothing serious.

Interesting stuff. I like the slow pace the story is going. I wonder what happened to Elsa's old gf Merida. Nothing bad I hope. Anyway, see you next chapter!

Hmmmm this story has been continuing well. I kinda wanna see the fight between Elsa and that thundershrike thing. Anyway, onwards!

This is getting even better. I believe I have started to connect some things but I will wait for more chapters to be sure. And thank you for telling us that you are ahead of your writing because that means that you haven 't give up the story (just that the updates are not very frequent). Keep up the good job!

This is a promising story so far. I find the psychological training of S.N.O. to be somewhat lax considering the stresses of dealing with the unorthodox on a daily basis. That point aside it is still retaining my interest. Please keep up the good work.

Nice story so far. Sadly, I feel Elsa's assessment was correct. Anna loses her composure way too easily for field work. It feels like Kristoff was not doing his job with her mental training.

Also, Anna should have known that "classified" answer was coming. That was obvious given a SECRET organization.