Reviews for Rider Reborn |
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Robbler chapter 11 . 10/16 Ahh, so good and yet discontinued. Hope we meet again mate. |
Dresden13 chapter 1 . 9/23 So….. you do realize that the books state that he had been banished due to Saphira attacking the elves special place? |
Matthew Fults chapter 1 . 8/28 Really interesting story. Sad that it seems abandoned. Only hope being I see you are still active in writing other fan fics and hopeful you could come back to this one. Regardless thank you for your contributions to the fan fic community. |
Gazamidori chapter 8 . 6/9 cancelling the concealment spell, naruto touched his first ... lol really naruto? |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/8 More please... |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/27 Will you ever update this story? |
Apollodorus13 chapter 11 . 12/9/2023 Damn, why do the cliffhangers always have fo be right before the best parts |
Apollodorus13 chapter 1 . 12/8/2023 Im enjoying the story so far but i must admit to thinking that Saphira and Eragon growing apart instead of even closer together is OOC. And maybe your did that on purpose for a future plot point but i feel that when two beings who are soul and life bound, lose their soul mates then they would recede into the comfort of their own bond because its all thats left. I honestly would expect them to be near inseparable for a few decades at most. Before going back to some normality. I think Saphira and Eragon would be a lot closer due to the loss honestly. Not really a complaint tho since it is fanfiction for a reason |
Apollodorus13 chapter 1 . 12/8/2023 I can easily see that spirit locking the Elves Mind it was possessing, so that she could see all of her people being killed as punishment for trying to chain it |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/4/2023 [ Arya looked up, blearily. Cancelling the concealment spell, Naruto touched his first two fingers to his lips and whispered "I am a Rider and a friend." ] Naruto? I think you meant 'Eragon' :-) |
Lowkojr chapter 11 . 9/4/2023 Really enjoyed this fic. Hope to see it continued. |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/15/2023 "If he weren't so reluctant to part ways with the steeds, Naruto would have suggested they all load up on the dragons and make for the hidden tunnel entrance by wing rather than foot." What the fuck? |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2023 "Eragon could only shake his head at the rampant sexism of this time." What the fuck are you talking about? That is embarrassing. |
Shadeymankey chapter 8 . 8/13/2023 Oof just noticed at the end you had Arya call him beloved. You mighta got mixed up there, she doesnt know him yet. |
Shadeymankey chapter 7 . 8/13/2023 Huh. And why not claim arya and murtagh then too? Seems a waste. Or at least Arya |