i want more

You know if Eragon truly wanted to take advantage of his foreknowledge he could've located the men and elves destined for the eggs back in the Vault of Souls. 30 Riders against one Mad King seems alot more fearsome than just 3. There were 26 eggs in the Vault set to be bonded to a Rider. Add that to the four that already exist and you have a small army. Christopher said that 1 fledging Rider is as powerful as 10 ordinary men. With that many Riders Eragon could've formed them into his personal battalion for the Varden.

PS: Sorry for the duplicate review I was trying to write the review when I dropped my phone. Catching it made me hit the post button

You know if Eragon truly wanted to take advantage of his foreknowledge he could've located the men and elves destined for the eggs back in the Vault of Souls. 30 Riders against one Mad King seems alot more fearsome than just 3. There were 26 eggs in the Vault set to be bonded to a Rider. Add that to the four that already exist and you have a small army. Christopher said that 1 Rider is as powerful With that many Riders Eragon could've formed them into his personal battalion for the Varden. J

i doubt youll read this, but you have a pretty egregious typo on chapter 8 calling Eragon Naruto. "Cancelling the concealment spell, Naruto touched his first two fingers to his lips..."

In chapter 9 you wrote "naruto would have" when you meant Eragon.
A great story I hope to see continue.

really hoping for more

Post this on wattpad and ao3
Too good

I saw that mistake of Naruto as well. I noticed the writer has other stories of the character Naruto. I put it down to a mix up of sorts by writing more than one story at a time. lol

Cancelling the concealment spell, Naruto touched his first two fingers to his lips and whispered "I am a Rider and a friend."

Naruto? :-p

Great fic, thanks for sharing it!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Please please go on i beg of you. I will swear fetility to your name raze cities to the groind for your honer just please continue great bard

I’ve always enjoyed this series and I couldn’t stop reading this story. Please update when you can.

what a read. hoping for more chapters soon! there are way too few good inheritance cycle fics on this site

nice writing Style. Realistic character development. And chance for a pretty epic final battle. Hope you'll take the story up again

A great story so far. I hope all is well and an update is in the works :)