Reviews for Raptor of the 20th Ward
GrinDLmania chapter 14 . 4/8/2019
Gotta love a little bit of Hide now and then.
LoamyCoffee chapter 14 . 4/7/2019
Very nice timeskip~ And oddly, I am now wondering about a potential Harry/Akira pairing for a future story or one shot.
PrimeMegalodon chapter 14 . 4/7/2019
Delightfully deranged why does that perfectly describe most of my favorite characters
Guest chapter 12 . 4/7/2019
- Epiphany

Never really thought about it, but the Toad qualifies for a chuunibyou label as well.

Waxing on about how she's the Senior blablabla.
In combination with her temper tantrums when she doesn't get her way.

- Personality
Oddly enough, I find this E'to more likable than your Cauldron version. This E'to has every right to be jealous of Harry's improved home life, yet isn't.

Whereas the Cauldron one is jealous, but has no true reason to be so, as she's quite ignorant of Harry's actual life.

Yet again, unlike the E'to of this story who at least did her homework first.

I'm not counting your Hermione's adopted sister (IIRC) or Olivander's granddaughter ones in this comparison as their early improved family lives had a significant effect on their personalities, outlooks and thus responses.

Unlike the ones I initially pointed out here, where any changes in life were fairly late in life and thus had minimal effect on their development.
GrinDLmania chapter 13 . 4/7/2019
Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Jose19 chapter 4 . 4/7/2019
Ken doesn’t change for the better after certain events but manages to turn around.
Jose19 chapter 2 . 4/7/2019
I remember quite well that both leads in the canon had a normal child in their relationship, and married each other without help of any potions.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 4/7/2019
The Tokyo Ghoul series is quite interesting, and I am happy that the main character hooked up with the woman she loves.

The thing in the story is whether to keep Harry as a Human or something else because there are enough ghouls in the plot even including the hybrid of the male lead.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/6/2019
The moment you mentioned kindred spirits in the authors note I had the disgusting flashback of Eto licking Kanekis eyeballs
LoamyCoffee chapter 13 . 4/6/2019
I do compare Mado to Ahab~ Oh yes, this is going pretty well.
Tsukoblue chapter 13 . 4/6/2019
I hope Eto doesn’t get a stomach ache from eating Umbridge lol
PrimeMegalodon chapter 13 . 4/6/2019
A much more fitting end for the old man as whether you like him (somehow) or not he was a warrior to the core and should have at least been able to go down swinging
LoamyCoffee chapter 12 . 4/5/2019
Oh heart pumping~
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