Oh my goodness, so cute! Love Feanor with little Finarfin!

it's impressive how you can so characterise both of them in just a few words~ and finarfin is so sweet~ aaah i want to keep him~ i want to keep both of them~

Poor little Arafinwë. Glad Feanáro agreed to play with him. I, too, believe his younger brothers really do respect him.

Cute Noldor fics... the best of the best.

"I am afraid that if I blink or turn away or do anything you will disappear."

Great! I thought of lot of things but not this ;) Nice, warm story and finally some justice for Arafinwë and Fëanáro :)

Hi Tinni!
Very nice, especially little Finarfin (sorry Arafinwe) really touched my heart(and Feanaro's too, it seems)
My English is still horrible, ain't it?;-)

Seems healthy for both brothers. I'm glad Feanor's heart can be softened. He needs to play more.

Past time to review this! A lovely story, and little Finarfin is completely endearing. No wonder Feanor capitulates!

Sweet Finarfin. He is so cute here and trusting. A very cute and fluffy fic.

A very cute little story - and one that brings out that Feanor's character also has a good side... It was touching when he said he was sorry... And little Finarfin is really cute!

Very well done! :-)

Aw, that was lovely! I love stories about little elves and this was just wonderful!

:)

Ain't little Finarfin so cute! No wonder Feanor couldn't resist playing with him. A great pity all the brothers couldn't just love each other

That was so sweet. ) Although the story is inspired by Finarfin's lovable sweetness, the real treasure is found in Feanaro's response. The spirit of fire can be warm and gentle too. Thanks for the fluffy moment.

That was very sweet! And even though he was just a tiny tot, Finarfin was so. . .in character, somehow.

*hugs lil' Finarfin*

Aww, that was cute.

“I am afraid that if I blink or turn away or do anything you will disappear.”

I especially liked that it made me want to say...'aw how cute!' and you having Feanor really being horrible to Arafinwe then after that being a 'proper' big brother! *grins*

Not a very constructive review but hey who says they always have to be constructive.

Anyway, great story!

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Of course I like it :D Thank you for the fic, it's beautifully sweet, Finarfin is adorable and Feanor is definitely nice(just like how I imagined him to be then). It's always good to see positive family dynamic in the Finwion household. Love the way you incorporated Iadel in. Again, thank you :)