Ok this started out really good but has gotten more juvenile as it goes on. Too bad it could have been so good.

This addictive story has lots of twists & turns.

Fabulous!

This story is truly incredible! If this were a novel, I would be writing fanfics for it. Thank you for sharing this story. I really enjoyed it a lot.

okay...I've been passing this up for a while now. I read the comments and decided to give it a go. And I really, really shouldn't be surprised cuz for some odd reason the stories I pass up end up being the best ones, so yeah. I'm hooked. Something tells me I should buck up for a hell of a ride. kudos 3

I really like their whole "I really don't love you thing." it makes me chuckle but at the same time i understand it and think its beautiful. It's like in meyers twilight books calling edward bella's boyfriend never felt right. They were so entwined and interlinked and intense that such mere terms would be derogatory to refer to them in such a way.

I truly think this is one of my all-time favorite stories! Thank you! I loved it.

Chapter 1 was so spooky!

I LOVED this story! Awesome, amazing, incredible! I kinda still wish they throw Renee into a volcano, but it get it.

This is so sick and twisted, I almost threw up reading it.

Ok! I was holding back my comments, because when I read a completed story I like to hold my comments ‘till the end, but...WTF! Renee is alive?!

Absolutely awesome story. So amazingcan’t wait to see what else you’ve written.

! No way!

Loved every chapter of this fic! Thank you sooooo much!

My answer to the author's question from this chapter:
Yes, I am disturbed by it all! But that's what makes this story so damn good! It's so unpredictable and keeps me on edge, chapter after chapter! It's like never ending adrenaline rush read! Loved EVERY single chapter! Omg I'm already on the last 5 or 6 chapters, I don't want this fic to end!

Idky this Bella keeps telling her enemies her true weaknesses...doesn't seem too smart