This has been an amazing journey! please, share the after Hogwarts chapter as well

This was a fantastic story! Excellent plot and character development. Definitely one of tge most well written pieces I've read! I would be very interested in some post epilogue pieces.

Thank you so much for this wonderful work!

Your writing reminds me of older books I enjoyed in the past. Engaging descriptive scenes, with proper details but not too much to overwhelm readers, not overly subtle to slight them with future plot twists, but very enjoyable and realistic. I can truly say I found a gem in your story. Thank you.

On the balance, I really like that. Thanks for posting!

The characters and world feel consistent in their characterisation. I could see this Tom becoming Voldemort if his life took a different path, for example.
The romance felt pretty good. It was never going to be a normal romance with Tom and Hermione, but this one did feel quite natural. No supernatural attraction necessary :P
It was also fun that you touched on themes of politics without getting preachy. I still don't know what your personal opinions would be.

It did bother me for a long time that Hermione let Tom get away with not asking her whether she wanted to marry him. It would have been satisfying if Tom had had to recognise Hermione's freedom to say no.
The final battle with Grindlewald was a bit of a dud. Why was he even there? What happened in Germany? It felt like you had to deal with Grindlewald to get to the next part of the story, and you just wanted to get it over with. Which is fair, I don't think a long war arc would have made this story better. I was vaguely expecting Tom to be involved in ambushing Grindlewald instead.

I think it could be great to have a sketch of how Hermione and Tom change (and take charge of) magical Britain. Honestly as much as you're willing to write. There's a lot that needs to be changed in that fictional world, these are fun characters, and their journey won't be trite. Tom's colourful interpretation of ethics would make sure of that.

When I tell you, this is my FAVORITE fanfic. The way you understand tge characters… *cheffs kiss*
Please grace us with more chapters.
Best wishes,
A dedicated fan

Thank you so much for your great story, I really jhope to read more from you. Thanks

thank you and congratulations for completing this story! it has been a great joy seeing this story update over the years. It would be lovely to have snippets of Tom and Hermione's life after the epilogue

Hermione feels a bit stupid/naive in this chapter. More so than I would feel in-character for her.
Not because she sells information about Tom, but because she sells it too cheaply. If she'd cooperate with Tom to determine which information to sell to Nott, she could get access to a couple of those private library books, and the private book on Oclumancy is particularly valuable. The favour she's receiving from Nott could be obtained relatively cheaply from Slughorn instead.
On the other hand I don't remember how open Tom has been to Hermione that he wants to acquire knowledge from private library books. Which would factor into Hermione's decision.

thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story. can’t wait to see any additional chapter.

Oh gosh I love this story! It's bittersweet that it's finished but thank you for all the time and hard work you've put into completing it! I love how you developed these characters, the attention to detail - historical and storywise. I'll be here waiting for any additional chapters or new stories you may post.

Wow! Congratulations on finishing such a long and well-planned story! You did an excellent job developing Tom's character and relationship with Hermione over time. I can't think of any other story that so fully and realistically lays out how Tom could end up being changed by companionship, while still fundamentally staying true to who he is. This final chapter was very cute and a perfect finale. Thank you.

Great story!

Drop the epilogue, pleeeease. Want to know hoy it went with Auror training and see Tom fatherly side lol

saved this chapter for my predictably terrible travel day and it has significantly improved my mood. I loved the battle strategyHermione's imperius trick especially :D

Me ha encantado, gracias por matar a Grindelwald, ame que papá Travers a pesar de averse resignado a posiblemente perder a su hijo fue a asegurarse que estuviera bien cuándo llegó a la tienda médica, Cómo siempre Dumbledore siendo un idiota, y Tom tan orgulloso de la corrupción de su prometida repartiendo imperdibables como dulces . Esperando las consecuencias incluidas el procesar todo fuera de la oclumancia, gracias por compartir.