Nice, part from spiderman

Está muy bueno el capítulo como fue el castigo de ron por querer revelar el secreto de Harry más que paso ahí mas que no puede decir nada más que perderá su magia y memoria más que pasara más adelante

I bloody fucking knew it!

Albus really be channeling his inner hiruzen sarurobi in this fic

It’s not that I hate Ginny I just hate Ronalds Bilious Weasels

...wow

I just read this straight through. While a harem it reality is incredibly difficult, they are starting a new magical species and need it for the Jumpstart.

Oh, and also, I just had an idea for how Harry can utilize his Phoenix and Basilisk traits in different environments; like he can grow only his Phoenix wings when he’s going for a fly, and he can replace his legs with a Basilisk tail for whenever he’s underwater, like for the Second Task when he visits the Merfolk.

Woof!
This was a tense amd heartbreaking chapter.
But i can’t say I didn’t have any reservations about Ron Weasley being Harry’s first best friend in the magical world after i got older and started noticing things differently, if not better.
The way I see it now, Neville would’ve made a much better first best friend.
At least he’s politer, has more etiquette, and he’s well versed in his fields of preference.
And he and Harry have something far more in common that Ron doesn’t:
They both grew up parentless in a hard knocks life.
Can’t wait to see how Harry deals with his loss of Ron’s friendship, brotherhood and how Hogwarts treats after the Unbreakable Vow, and maybe having Harry do something to get his mind off of this with his ladies would be a good influence on him and his fragile heart.
See you for the next chapter!

I MUST AGREE WITH ZEROEXIA IF YOU ARE BURNT OUT TAKE A VACATION IF YOU NEED TO WE ARE THE ONES WHO NEED TO BE PATIENT AND WE WILL WAIT THESE LAST TWO UPDATES OF YOURS IS PROOF THAT YOU CAN DO THIS BUT YOU JUST NEED TIME.

If you’re feeling burnt out take a break we will wait, on a side note why has everyone forgotten that he is a Demi-god now

gruesome, but she did have it coming

I have read a few paragraphs, but the staggering amount of language errors completely turns me off. I have not even gotten far enough to see if the story is worth it. At the very least, a proofreader is needed.

Your editor needs to tighten things up some of the things you say are incomprehensible.

Its always sad for people to realize to late what theyve done. And what they lost.