Reviews for Stare of the Basilisk King |
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![]() ![]() Love the story, though I had hoped to see it completed already. Please update and complete this story soon. Have a great week. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story should be make into a 7 book Series |
![]() ![]() Can't wait to hear what will happen to Ron, I hope he's royally screwed! Looking forward to the next chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro, It'd be hilarious if this Omake was canon.(o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Susan was very specific with her sneeze feeling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read one of those! A Harry asks Fleur to the ball fic. I think it was Harry Potter and Lust, OR Eagle Soars. One if not both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's late, but Fleur, Hermione, Ginny, and Luna have my vote. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus fChrist no I understand why he states this is his first story this mis wordy and lacks proper punctuation and pacing I'm on chapter two let's hope it gets better |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've noticed a recovering type-o you vassaate between capitalizing and not capitalizing names "given names and did names are always capitalized. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need to work on your grammar i.e. When you're describing a location like an office add the " 's" at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The big question is what happened to his clothes during the fire... |
![]() ![]() ![]() So … I’m guessing you never actually read the books, or even watched the movies, and have just picked things up from fanfiction? That’s the only way I can see getting the details and timing of … well, everything, slightly wrong. It’s pretty jarring to read. It helps the have good knowledge of the source material if you trying to base your story on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've enjoyed this story and can't wait for the next update. thanks for writing and entertaining us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story just binged the whole thing and am loving it so far |