Reviews for Heir of Hyoudou |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty interesting chapter, dialogues really improved to last time, just there are a few grammatical mistakes in Rias' part. Really can't wait to see how their abilities will change(glad especially Asia will have a decent training), see you soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome training chapter! Please continue and continue the cannon timeline. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow thanks for the chapter. It’s been a while. It was a good chapter. This chapter/story is so goddamn fluffy and I fucking love it. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ages 7 & 8 Lust Lmfao choose one, mate. Age them up or make their affection more innocent. Unless you want to go into detail on how devil physiology is drastically different from humans it’s just fucked up to use the word lust in reference to young kids. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update. Love the romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple, but nice chapter, it was quite funny che part of bros and i hope to see more of them when Issei will add more male pieces to the peerage, trough the interactions beetween girls need more developement, it feels kinda forced , but is a flaw also canon has very often. Hoping you won't use Loki in this arc, keep up the good work and see you soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good can't wait until next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter! Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s been a while. When I saw the email, I had to stop everything I was doing and had to read this. This was a very good chapter. Absolutely was not expecting a bath scene but maybe you started it last chapter. And not expecting murayama to show her carnal desires. And not expecting Vali to be embarrassed by issei. And finally not expecting a lemon. Very good. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update it a great story |
![]() ![]() Update please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy reading this story so keep up the awesome work |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue and update the next chapters soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story alot I can't wait for the next you update soon! |