Reviews for Heir of Hyoudou |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Seems interesting will keep a eye on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() more cliffhangers ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good. Good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a nice start |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brah fix your grammar! It’s gremory not germory. You need to fix it. And you have to make it flow better. I’ll be looking forward to this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the first chapter. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Has potential.. Though my problem with some "Issei born into devil nobility" stories is that he still has his Japanese name even if he is born into nobility as a devil.. I would expect his name Issei Hyoudou as his cover name while in the human world, but not in devil society.. Overall, though? Nice concept. Needs help in grammar though. Good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple, but interesting, trough i would avoid Draigg for now(i guess Issei's mother is an human), glad for the small harem, i hope it will remain like thath. Best of luck with next chapters and fights. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a few spelling errors and such, but overall a nice chapter. |
![]() ![]() I like this story! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, so far it’s good, I didn’t like that much that Issei unlocked his SG that earlier in the story, but it’s your story. Another thing that doesn’t make sense is, why Rias would have lustful eyes for Issei (as Ddraig said) if she is a 8 year old? That doesn’t make sense, they are just kids. Overall a few things that doesn’t make sense but it’s a good start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this, update please |