|Reviews for Holiday Party at Hogwarts|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
AMAZING for a ten year old!
| A chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
OMG, you were such a bad writer back then! You're way better at writing now. Maybe you could rewrite the story and make it better.
| Samara Donally chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
This is good. Silly, but good. ( Especially since you wrote this in fifth grade!)
| stupidramblings chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Alright, so ijustread your story the curtain call, and i read this, and I really do find it amazing how much your writing has changed! Good job! And by the way, the other story was absolutely amazing! I loved it! Keep writing!
| SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
| BlossomQuill chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Lol! This was quite sweet!
| lunaleth chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
This is actually hilarious hahaha :)
It's so adorable in a little kid, innocent way.
| Alice chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
this is adorable!
i only say this cause you obviously wrote it a while ago, but really... this is like a gazillion times better than anything i wrote back in the day...
| Quil Explodes chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
oh...oh...wow. Okay. It was...okay, it was funny. I laughed. But it was also...really good for someone in 4th/5th grade. Like, really good.
I loved the "lie a river without any rocks in the way" (i think i killed that quote) and...hehe..."togetherness."
I know, I was like, what the hell, I didn't think Harry and Ron were THAT stupid. Ah, well...it was nice that those things happened before the last book, anyways.
And I can't even say how much your writing has changed. I've read some of your stories, and I love them, and, though I also love this...it's in a different way, I have to say. It WAS pretty funny.
(wait, so did ron just like WATCH Harry and Ginny kiss? did they KNOW? Gah! Awkward!)
| Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
AW! It was cute! A little choppy, but you were ony 10.
| smile123 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
so that was pretty much really funny
but you were a pretty good author for your age!
DONT WORRY- you are a MUCH better author now...i love your stories...nice job!
| choirsinger chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
lol! no oneshots allowed! u update now!
| reader chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
okay, I'll get this over with:
that was one of the most funniest stories ever!
Oh, the good old days in elementary school..
Hah, this is my FAVORITE PART:
That was strange. Ron got a FIREBLAST the new edition of a FIREBOLT. Harry got two books - A History of Hogwarts and The Dark Lord and Harry Potter. Harry thought it was a bit odd that Ron got something from Hermione that was probably 20 times more expensive than Harry's present from Hermione.
hmm... That IS a bit odd, Harry! Good job for thinking that!
I see so much difference in your writing now and then. You have improved so much, I mean, most of your stories are amazing and fun to read. Just keep up the good work and keep updating!
| Mocked and Dismayed chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Heehee. This is really funny. It's a cute idea, if very puerile. And, yeah, you're writing had changed a lot. Nice to know that you can put up work that isn't up to par and still be proud.
| moonlight2007 chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
It's great! But your missing words and when Harry first sees them kissing his sentance makes no sense