|Reviews for Jasper's Love|
| meg5442 chapter 19 . 11/27/2022
i have just discovered your story and I am quite enjoying it. Jasper and Bella or Paul and Bella are my favorite pairings and this Jasper is such a gentleman. Anyway I love your story thanks for sharing.
| Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 10 . 9/26/2019
It was a fun family chapter until the arrival of the nomads! They really frightened Bella!
| Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 9 . 9/26/2019
I liked how you changed everyone's story such that Rose was accepting of her change, how Alice found the Cullen' s and an was mated to Edward!
| Jaysto chapter 17 . 8/3/2019
Great story so far looking forward to where you take it.
| the newest daughter chapter 17 . 8/1/2019
Take a deep breath Major and then go kick some ass
| LunaM303 chapter 17 . 7/26/2019
I'm not even gonna try to guess but anyways. what was I gonna say oh yea U LEAVE BELLA AND IF THE WOLVES FIGHT U . .THEM U WILL BLAZE THEY ARE MINE well not Sam because of emily,Jared due to Kim,Quil cause of clare,Leah because not bi,and Seth Collin and Brady because they are my babies BUT THE REST IS MINES AND ILL BE DAMN IF THEY GET HURT BECAUSE OF ÉSA PUTA*take a deep breath*too much?
| sarae32 chapter 16 . 5/22/2019
All I can say is I hope Bella is the one to destroy Maria! I’m sure when Bella turns she’ll be a force that no other vampire has ever seen. Great chapter
| sarae32 chapter 13 . 5/22/2019
Who has so many space clothes? I’m curious, does bella have a shield because it’s never talked about with Edward trying to read her mind. Great chapter
| sarae32 chapter 12 . 5/22/2019
More shirtless Jasper please.
| sarae32 chapter 11 . 5/22/2019
Great chapter! Can’t wait to meet Peter and Charlotte.
| sarae32 chapter 5 . 5/21/2019
Impressed Bella’s dad lets her spend the night with someone she just met. I mean, I’m not saying I object just not a typical high school parent mind set. I am loving Jaspers use of ‘Darlin’, best word in the southern dictionary. Great chapter
| sarae32 chapter 3 . 5/21/2019
I love hearing both Jasper and Bella’s POV. And Jasper is beyond perfect in this story. Great chapter
| Kayozm chapter 3 . 5/14/2019
I love that you’re not demonising Edward or Alice. I find that aspect of Bella-Jasper stories challenging sometimes.
Do you use a word pressing program like Word to edit, or are you typing straight into the app? I think using the grammar and spelling functions of word, or better yet granmarly, might help you pick up some errors, which would make for a better reading experience.
Have you thought about asking for a beta reader, or just a proof reader?
I also like your Jasper’s softness, if that’s the right word. I could imagine falling for him!
| amy.campbell.378199 chapter 1 . 12/30/2018
Cute start with a very nice Jasper
| asia.joanna.7334 chapter 14 . 12/17/2018
Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it plis more suunn.