I seriously absolutely about cried when I read the end :')
can't believe I get to help and be apart ...
btw love the choice with the classic:)

So what happens next?

I love the new backstories! It fits much better, in my opinion! I did not see any typo's this chapter. :) Take your time with the family stuff.

absolutely love the new chapter :)))
I cant wait for more :))

Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it plis more suunn.

Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it.

How were Pete and Char changed?

awe I can't get enough of you :)))!

I love this story and i can't wait to see where you go from here that story.I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Omg this is so good.I like sooooo! :)) I hope you update really soon. I can't wait to see where you go from here.

I really like protective Jasper watching over Bella. And honest Jasper telling her about Peter and Charlotte is sexy too. I wish Jasper told Bella about the scent he found outside. Keeping secrets from Bella is not romantic at all. LOL I really don'y like the idea of Jasper knowing Maria previously at all. You have me sold on your different back story for him and it is already horrible enough. I don't like reading stories where characters have amnesia or something similar and forget awful or important people or activities. -shudders- But with that being said, I would still read anything you write. I would just be really sad and have to have a happy story to read after.

I always wonder in S.M.'s story and now yours if Bella's dreams were some kind of future seeing or warning system of sorts. I really felt she should have told someone about them. In your story, Jasper would be really open to her telling him something like that. Bella seemed to be more included with everyone in their activity rather than an outsider. :) I'm really glad that you didn't have Bella and the Cullens run off and away trying to escape the nomads. Great chapter.

Omg, omg, The chapter is great! Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story!I hope you update really soon. !I can't wait to read update soon! :)

What does Maria have to do with Alice? I'm glad Rose got away from there father

I really liked how you changed and adapted Alice's and Rose's back stories. Alice being changed by Maria instead of Jasper was a big twist to me. I also really liked the thought of little baby sister Rose trying her best to help an injured Jasper after his asshole of a father beat him. Great chapter. :)