Reviews for Jasper's Love
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 2 . 11/4/2018
I really enjoyed how warm and accepting Jasper's reactions to Bella were! Emmett may be a goofy prankster but he was receptive to her as a person!

I really was a sweet chapter and I think Bella already has a crush on Jazz!

Happy Writing!
traceybuie chapter 6 . 11/4/2018
It seems like they had a fun day and got a lot closer to each other. :)
lyds11 chapter 6 . 11/4/2018
Another great chapter can't wait for the next
traceybuie chapter 5 . 11/4/2018
I'm pleased that the 2 of them felt comfortable with each other enough to have a first kiss. Really sweet chapter.
traceybuie chapter 4 . 11/4/2018
I'm happy Jasper doesn't sneak into Bella's room while she is sleeping. That was creepy for S.M. to have Edward do.
traceybuie chapter 3 . 11/4/2018
So Edward is still going to be Bella's singer? I;m happy he is aware of it and going to take precautions. Rose being pleasant to Bella is a wonderful change, I always wonder why everyone HAS to make Rose a bitch. ?who knows? Bella putting Lauren and Jessica in their place instead of being a doormat is great.
traceybuie chapter 2 . 11/4/2018
I'm glad she is getting along with both Jasper and Emmett so far. I hope one of them brings up the tingly/shocking feelings when Bella and Jasper touch.
traceybuie chapter 1 . 11/4/2018
Interesting differences so far...
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 2 . 11/3/2018
i like it:)
TrueSkye chapter 1 . 11/1/2018
SO stoked for a new Jasper/Bella story!
Kayozm chapter 1 . 11/1/2018
Hey, I think it's a nice start to a story. Read over it again though. maybe print it out and read it on paper, or read out loud. There are a lot of typos and missing words, as well as a few grammar errors. Reading out loud often makes it easier to pick up on typos that our eyes skip over when we read normally.
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 1 . 11/1/2018
I loved this. It's an amazing start and I'm extremely curious as to how this story is going to progress. I'm a fan. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 1 . 11/1/2018
I think this chapter done in Jasper's POV was interesting, sweet nd Jasper's reaction to Bella was perfect! As described by Carlisle, it appears he's found his mate seems very happy an excited to meet he and talk to her!

Question: Are you receptive to constructive criticism via Private Message (PM)? If you are, there are some grammatical points I wish to share with you and I'd appreciate if you'd PM e with your response.

It's a well cone chapter and I love the story's premise as well as Jasper's long hair!
I also liked how you dressed Bella. It sees to fit her better than jeans and tee-shirts forever!

Happy Writing and have fun with it!
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