Im gonna be honest, this whole sport's festival ark is pissing me off. Not because it isn't written well, but because of everyone's unreasonable attitudes. All of this is more than a fair bit slanted against our more reasonable mc and all this pointless filler isn't letting me get to the resolution. Its a drag. Theres probably 3 chapters worth of development here that should have been cut out and/or left as a flashback for another time when they'd be actually important. We didn't need an in depth play by play for every obstacle in the obstacle course, we didn't need as much focus on the strategizing for the stupid chariot battle, nor all of everyone's stupid thoughts slinging from one point of view to the next like a ping-pong ball playing table tennis. All of this a hyper focus of negativity around and towards the mc to reinforce how annoyed he is, how much pressure he's under, etc... Your work is well written, but you created an infuriating dynamic here and then pushed it at every turn across several chapters, added filler like love is war, some nightmares, constant self reflection and doing mental gymnastics dragging it on and on and on and on... couldn't you have added any contrast to give your reader's release? Like, idk, his classmates NOT ganging up on him about todoroki and acting like he's the one that needs to apologize when he just got stabbed in the back by the arrogant deuchebag who couldn't put in the effort to make up for his own mistake and instead decided to act like he was saving a classmate before giving them all extreme electro shock therapy and taking advantage of their surprise to steal their headbands AND freeze their feet to the ground in the last 2 minutes of the competition to not give them the time needed to recover? And why weren't the rest of his team angry at all? They were fucked over at least half as bad but they didn't have his back at all.

There's times when being angry is justified or at least reasonable and Hachiman had every right to feel angry and no obligation to accommodate todoroki by listening to whatever excuse the boy felt made it ok to expect Hachiman to just drop the issue. But no, his classmates all think it was fair game and that no matter what Hachiman had to do at the moment or what condition he was in, that he OWED it to todoroki to go out of his way to hear him out instead of eat the buffet of food he needed just to not to pass out. Hachiman's own guilt was already plenty sufficient, you didn't need to add in the cold shoulder treatment.

But mostly, the filler! WHAT! THE! HELL!?

Keep it up I love this story please.

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First of all, I'm very happy because I'm about to write it, I really love this story and I'm waiting for an update for a long time (I never lost hope), I'm very happy that I'm about to write it, I hope I can see the next chapters soon.

And... many thanks for writing again! Now that I thanked you, leave some comments.

The moment when Hachiman thinks it's a good idea to kiss Kawasaki I like it very much, the whole existential crisis of knowing if it was the one he liked Kawasaki or the invincible figure that everyone believes he was was very realistic and something that you allows you to see your feelings with greater clarity.

When All Might's final question left me surprised, I wanted to see how the pitch-eyed protagonist responded to this

I already thought it was suspended

I hope he's able to get a second copy of the quirk from izuku, and it somehow does something magical. Also hope he doesn't suddenly become some goody goody desperate for attention and praise. Seems like it might be heading that way, I dunno.

Not my cup of coffee. Too much crossover characters and so far it's veering slightly from canon.

Rekka as in Rekka no Honno? Hahahaha

Great to see you back, great chapter

you can't go from happy ship time to the "did you copy my quirk" bomb what the bruh

I forgot how goated this shit was for an entire year. Welcome back King and I hope the updates flow now.

A little advice. There are still some paragraphs that are too long. At least... get used to separating sentences so they don't merge into one long paragraph. As long as the next sentence doesn't interfere with the previous sentence, just separate it into a new line. It's very tiring to look at dense blocks of text without any spaces.

The prodigal son returns. Great chapter to return with, I'm looking forward to seeing how this little chat goes. Knowing All Might, though, Hikki might just say "nah" and All Might goes with it.

oh boi, good luck hikigaya explaining lol