Reviews for The Trainer and the Tomboy
MjrGenMatt chapter 15 . 6/23
This was really touching, and so well done. You did an excellent job writing this chapter, I just wish the inspiration wasn't so somber. I'm sorry about your grandfather, I hope he rests easy. He'd be happy to know that you wrote something so loving in his memory
IceCreamAndPizza chapter 15 . 6/23
This was beautiful, and I'm very sorry to hear about your grandfather.
Rebekah Matthews chapter 15 . 6/22
The tone of this one shot was actually really depressing but it was written well. I love the shipping you wrote in this. DawnxGary and PikachuxKetchup. I love Pikachu's love of ketchup - it's so cute and I'm glad you included it. I like how you did the pokeshipping in this. It worked so well. Poor Prof Oak though - they do have a great bond and it's nice how you portrayed this in this one shot - R
juaniu1994 chapter 15 . 6/21
That was sad but nice. It makes me remember what happened today. I still have my grandfather. I went with my father and gave him a present but we could not hug because of the corona virus. He seems to be ok but he is 84 years old and he is alone. He still work but he staying at home because of the risk. We do not have to waste time that is the lesson.
Northstar Pokeshipper chapter 15 . 6/21
Nice chapter. My grandpa also passed away in April of this year. The seventeenth to Be percise. Covid took him.
Sparklewolf chapter 14 . 10/28/2019
Love these. Brilliant writing. Brilliant character capture and storylines.
Your talents incredible and I would like to thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading and thus imagining.
I wish the anime was this right now.
Percyfan1998 chapter 14 . 8/8/2019
Hah! 'Landowner', somehow this title alone amuses me with the story. Interesting story here, fascinating how in-universe the dynamax preparation is happening well before Ash even gets close to going there, but interesting all the same! I like how this explores Misty's whole view of it, and seeing her in a position where her home has been torn down is a nice change to the usual narrative.
Rebekah Matthews chapter 14 . 8/6/2019
Well... this was pretty great. You captured emotions perfectly in this. Actual LOL at Tracey. Brock was so perfect in this. All characters were written so well. I love your little Psyduck references. I like how she found some peace with the change. Beautifully done! - R
Guest chapter 14 . 8/6/2019
When ash and Misty do see each other again they should show each other how much they grown and matured since they last saw each other and as for their future battle ash should bring his gerninja and some of his other kalos region Pokemon with him to introduce to misty and show misty how far he's come especially showing ash gerninja to her which not only suprise her but really impress her to and I know misty will have plenty of suprised for ash to that would suprise and impress him to I really do hope by the time ash reunite with misty he gets more less dense and starts noticing not just his own feelings for misty but hers for him to as well be more smarter and mature to because seeing him dense at the most obvious things can be funny at times but also annoying so ash should show another side to misty that will make misty fall for ash even more than before same goes for misty
cake0108 chapter 14 . 8/5/2019
Aaah love misty!
Rebekah Matthews chapter 13 . 7/27/2019
This chapter was genuinely so good. I loved the interactions with the pokemon. What you did with that tentacool was awesome! It was so cute how Misty expressed that Ash's wellbeing was more important to her than a water pokemon, and furthermore, a tentacool which she loves! This was beautifully written and so enjoyable. Your creativity never ceases to amaze me. The lava game sure did take me back to my childhood! You integrated humour into this one shot and it was very well done! Thanks for the smiles! - R
Poke shipper chapter 13 . 7/25/2019
Ash should ask misty out on a date that's something she's been waiting a very long time for him to ask her out I know she be very surprised at first but be very happy to hear him finally ask her out and use this opportunity to tell each other their feelings for each other ash and Misty know that their the only ones for them their lovers and soulmates at heart
Rebekah Matthews chapter 12 . 7/7/2019
Awww I loved this - this was adorable!
I loved Max's remark that Misty had finally mastered the ability to breathe fire. This cracked me up.
I honestly feel like this is how Ash and Misty interacted with each other after they parted as travelling companions. It's actually really sad. The ending of this was so sweet. I totally pictured this. - R
Rebekah Matthews chapter 11 . 7/7/2019
I LOVE pistachio ice cream! Great choice!
I always found Misty's sisters intolerable. I liked that you added in some Daisy and Tracey shipping. I've no idea why it just works but it totally does. :) - R
Rebekah Matthews chapter 10 . 7/6/2019
I couldn't think of anything more fitting than Pikachu eletrocuting Ash to revive him :')
I must say your use of a wide vocabulary is amazing! - R
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