|Reviews for Walk Away|
| Ann Jinn chapter 1 . 5/22
I never thought of it before and it is never mentioned as being protected against, but one person casting a spell from the sidelines. Great idea and story.
| FFFudgeUp chapter 3 . 5/16
Mercy Fuller is my new favorite character. Head canon is that Mercy is really Mary Poppins. Their use of magic and organizational skills ring true. Thanks for sharing.
| typo chapter 3 . 5/15
second pudding - seconds of the pudding
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/15
The sex thing comes across as really creepy, and just out of nowhere. Strains SoD too hard, reads like something from a porn plot.
Both that she would offer, and that Harry would just accept it is outright nonsensical.
Seems pointless to hide as a married couple, and all that would really be needed would be a few hugs a day to get Harry over his awkwardness.
| typo chapter 2 . 5/15
was an anti-climax - was anticlimactic
| typo chapter 1 . 5/15
Think you mean crux, not nux
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/15
"Out of the question! You would never be party to any magical contract ever again. Think about it, Potter! One day you might need a loan to buy property, and many careers require such a contract. Even a marriage contract will no longer be possible."
An interesting twist, much more interesting I think than him losing his magic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/24
All you gotta do is, Walk A Way-Ay-Aiy!
| BMS chapter 3 . 4/18
| crankypants16 chapter 3 . 4/9
| Bronze chapter 1 . 3/31
Harry cracked under the pressure? Are you cracked?! Harry finally grew a pair and left before Fumblemort and that supposed school could kill him! In four years at that place not once did ANY of the so-called professors stand up for his safety! So I totally agree with Harry that he should get the hell out of Dodge before they manage to kill him. Oh, they'll be all sorry that he died but Harry'll still be dead! Fumblemort even admitted that HE left baby Harry on the Dursleys' doorstep on a cold November night. If that doesn't show how little the man cares for Harry nothing ever will!
| Fallow56 chapter 3 . 3/14
xxXxx KUDOS xxXxx : )
| zugrian chapter 3 . 3/11
Interesting story, and I like your different take on Harry walking away and just trying to figure out how to live.
Mercy is a great OC too, and the whole bit with different identities and the age potion could have gone in a lot of other directions. I was actually pretty disappointed when Hermione showed up. Imagine Harry & Mercy traveling the world together as spies. Or cat burglars or something...
Also, if Harry is going to change his name, then Hermione with her much more unusual name really should have changed hers too.
| ak chapter 3 . 3/3
| Smithback chapter 3 . 3/1