Reviews for Walk Away |
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Darknessdawns chapter 3 . 8/28 This was definitely an interesting piece. So far I'm enjoying your 'walk away' stories and look forward to seeing what the next holds. As for this one, I liked the idea of Harry finally having the support and guidance he needed. It was sweet that Hermione followed him and I enjoyed seeing how everything worked out for them. |
diamondnightskies chapter 3 . 1/29 Weird that Harry is talking about loving Mercy like family considering they were obviously sleeping together right up until Hermione came into the picture. And how does Hermione not realize the changes considering how awkward she knew he has always been with girls? Why is Hermione's name not changed as well as Harry's when they're talking at the end? It's very recognizable also. I do like what they ended up doing with their lives, I imagine it is very fulfilling. And sorry to seem so negative about it, but I really don't think the story recovered from that sexual relationship between Harry and Mercy. |
diamondnightskies chapter 2 . 1/29 I mean, there's only one more chapter so I'll finish the story, but you've completely lost me with sex business. I can't stop cringing about it. Where the heck did that even come from? In no way, shape, or form was that necessary. For fuck's sake they could have acted like siblings if she really felt like they had to convincingly have some sort of relationship to the outside world. Colleagues, acquaintances, friends, cousins...plenty to choose from. Her suggesting sex with her underage employer (who is a virgin) is vile, especially considering the advice she gave him earlier made it clear she's aware he tends to defer to the people he sees as being in charge. |
X from Aumsville chapter 2 . 9/30/2023 God Liberalism! (Sadly Republicans don't care either and want a one world business) |
X from Aumsville chapter 1 . 9/30/2023 Welcome to modern liberalism Harry. Do as I say not as I do. Cmon to Al Gore's big mansion with a 100,000$ yearly power bill! and tells you to not use electricity except to charge your mandatory EV. |
Kai chapter 3 . 9/5/2023 Pffft. As if all students' names would fit on a Wall of Disgrace. After all, Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore is such a long name and deserves to be written in such huge letters that few other names would fit. And Severus Snape and Minerva McGonagall would come before the students. |
Kai chapter 2 . 9/5/2023 Harry could've adopted the name Parry Hotter-Who-Is-Not-Harry-Potter-The-Boy-Who-Lived-Honestly-! Would've fooled everyone, I'm sure. |
geenakmom chapter 3 . 4/25/2023 Enjoyed your story. |
HoneyBear84 chapter 3 . 3/17/2023 Love it |
WhiteElfElder chapter 3 . 11/20/2022 An interesting idea for a story. I have to wonder if Hermione was ever told all of that Mercy taught Harry? |
old-crow chapter 3 . 10/9/2022 Hi, I enjoyed the tale and thought you had a great story concept. cheers, Old-Crow |
Coul532003 chapter 2 . 9/9/2022 I like you analogy about false names. It reminds me of someone changing the part in their hair to the other side and wearing glasses,then calling one Clark Kent and the other Superman. I like your story very much. |
Cwhit930 chapter 3 . 8/5/2022 Thank you for the share a good story line of Harry getting want he wanted. |
SherlockWholmes chapter 3 . 4/14/2022 Harry's happy and he did it mostly on his own. His choice to walk away and hire help. |
hisnhers chapter 1 . 4/10/2022 Yup, like you said, The smallest thing can change the future. Harry crying out as he bumped into Karkarroff changed everything, his entire future. Let's hope it's a change for the better. Getting away from Dumbledore will be a great first step to improvement.I hope McGonagall wraps his beard around his throat and threatens him. Not kill him, just yell in Scottish Gaelic in his face. Yupyup. his |