Reviews for A Smile on Your Face and a Song in Your Heart |
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![]() ![]() He can basically hear background music and sounds |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story. The descriptions you give and images conjured by the music and scenes are so amazing and abstract. I'm totally here for it! Thanks for writing such an amazing piece! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg the cinnamon roll has Roger's gift! He can hear the Voice of All Things! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I already love this story. |
![]() ![]() "Why couldn't she stop thinking about him then?" Because some women like men who are weak, pathetic, complete pussies. Also, f**k this noise. What's the f**king point of giving Izuku a quirk when you don't change canon at all? That's f**king stupid. The whole point of writing fan fiction is TO CHANGE WHAT'S HAPPENING! Morons, the lot of you. If I wanted to read canon, I'd read f**king canon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing and way of describing things is so unique and beautiful! I love it so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another one I hope you pick up again someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The centering... Why?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Disappointed that this seems dropped. Other than that... did you or Izuku forget the Sky and Earth, as well as words, have a soul? Doesn't that contradict some of what was said by him? Or was he lying to them and hiding it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very disappointed that the last time this was updated was 2019. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I hope you're doing well. So this story is amazing. It seems like you're heading towards a Jiro pairing which is cool but I like the Momo pairing more in general but even for this story. So it was a little disappointing that she kinda faded to the background but I get why Jiro is more relevant here. I have struggled a little with your characterisation of Izuku. He seems to be angrier in the middle, with the other students. But I don't think your depiction of him is wrong/bad. It sucks that you stopped the story here, I would really love to read more. Especially since you're leaving us in a cliffhanger with the Hosu scene (Izuku's interaction with Stain's ideology), the relationships between Izuku, his classmates, his teachers and Inko as well as his new technique in this more developed form. Anyway, thank you for writing this story, I've thoroughly enjoyed the journey and I hope to see an update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter as it addresses Jenny's mental health and his history. Can't think of any other story that went this in depth (from a professional's standpoint). Canon-Izuku had some serious neglect issues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The scene with iida and izuku hearing the words made a weird connection in my brain. He reminds me of Melody from uhhhh i think it was A Third Path To The Future? Or some Harry Potter/Marvel crossover. I dont read comics like that so idk about her source character, but she could hear the songs of other people as her mutant power and had issues making sense of things like everything youd get as part of a normal education. Izuku is like if you took her mutant power and dialed it to an 11 |
![]() ![]() ![]() this fic is really a hidden gem! i still have something on the back burner that Ive been working on where izuku has empath powers that lead to him being a watered down lantern, but the imagery on this blows mine out the water! AMAZING work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read this story and I’m simply amazed by it. Love the concept. Please hope you continue this story |